Dreamsnake: Revision history

14 February 2024

• curprev 03:4703:47, 14 February 2024‎ InternetArchiveBot talk contribs‎ 37,543 bytes +159‎ Rescuing 1 sources and tagging 0 as dead.) #IABot (v2.0.9.5 undo

29 August 2023

• curprev 15:3015:30, 29 August 2023‎ Vanamonde93 talk contribs‎ 37,384 bytes −306‎ saving this one for pending work on McIntyre, but this isn't necessary here undo
• curprev 15:3015:30, 29 August 2023‎ Vanamonde93 talk contribs‎ m 37,690 bytes +9‎ script-assisted date audit and style fixes per MOS:NUM, fix other formatting undo
• curprev 07:4107:41, 29 August 2023‎ Divudi85 talk contribs‎ 37,681 bytes +8‎ No edit summary undo Tag: Visual edit
• curprev 07:4107:41, 29 August 2023‎ Divudi85 talk contribs‎ 37,673 bytes +281‎ ref undo Tag: Visual edit

18 December 2022

• curprev 20:2520:25, 18 December 2022‎ Vanamonde93 talk contribs‎ 37,392 bytes 0‎ fix typo, and another contraction undo

17 December 2022

• curprev 18:0118:01, 17 December 2022‎ 151.33.203.0 talk‎ 37,392 bytes 0‎ →‎Notes and references: separated undo Tags: Mobile edit Mobile app edit Android app edit
• curprev 18:0018:00, 17 December 2022‎ 151.33.203.0 talk‎ 37,392 bytes +2‎ →‎Reception and recognition: Avoid contracted forms undo Tags: Mobile edit Mobile app edit Android app edit

14 December 2022

• curprev 03:4103:41, 14 December 2022‎ Vanamonde93 talk contribs‎ 37,390 bytes +34‎ rv to FAC version; not sure how I didn't notice these, but the subtle changes to meaning and flow are not improvements undo

15 June 2022

• curprev 09:5609:56, 15 June 2022‎ GreenC bot talk contribs‎ 37,356 bytes +1‎ Rescued 1 archive link. Wayback Medic 2.5 undo

11 February 2022

• curprev 23:1823:18, 11 February 2022‎ SdkbBot talk contribs‎ m 37,355 bytes −1‎ Fixed consecutive punctuation error and general fixes (task 3) undo Tag: AWB

26 August 2021

• curprev 15:0615:06, 26 August 2021‎ Vanamonde93 talk contribs‎ 37,356 bytes +11‎ slightly wordier, but flows better, IMHO undo

11 July 2021

• curprev 07:0207:02, 11 July 2021‎ 2600:1700:d591:5f10:bdee:36d8:991d:fac3 talk‎ 37,345 bytes +7‎ Author undo

19 June 2021

• curprev 16:0516:05, 19 June 2021‎ Aoba47 talk contribs‎ 37,338 bytes +14‎ Restored revision 1028344304 by Mike Christie (talk): I do not think these edits are improvements. undo Tags: Twinkle Undo
• curprev 06:0806:08, 19 June 2021‎ 2600:1700:d591:5f10:dcdc:726f:d4e5:d25c talk‎ 37,324 bytes −7‎ →‎Reception and recognition: McIntyre -> its undo Tag: Reverted
• curprev 06:0606:06, 19 June 2021‎ 2600:1700:d591:5f10:dcdc:726f:d4e5:d25c talk‎ 37,331 bytes −7‎ →‎Reception and recognition: on her own -> own undo Tag: Reverted

13 June 2021

• curprev 11:4611:46, 13 June 2021‎ Mike Christie talk contribs‎ 37,338 bytes +35‎ Tweak recent edits; "someone who is" emphasizes the point, and "comes from" separates the character's reaction from the reason for it undo Tag: Visual edit
• curprev 08:0308:03, 13 June 2021‎ 2600:1700:d591:5f10:b121:6a05:542b:7523 talk‎ 37,303 bytes −1‎ →‎Themes and structure: are -> is undo
• curprev 08:0108:01, 13 June 2021‎ 2600:1700:d591:5f10:b121:6a05:542b:7523 talk‎ 37,304 bytes −10‎ →‎Themes and structure: repetitive also undo
• curprev 07:5207:52, 13 June 2021‎ 2600:1700:d591:5f10:b121:6a05:542b:7523 talk‎ 37,314 bytes −8‎ →‎Themes and structure: comes from -> is undo
• curprev 07:5007:50, 13 June 2021‎ 2600:1700:d591:5f10:b121:6a05:542b:7523 talk‎ 37,322 bytes −15‎ →‎Themes and structure: as a healer undo
• curprev 07:4807:48, 13 June 2021‎ 2600:1700:d591:5f10:b121:6a05:542b:7523 talk‎ 37,337 bytes −10‎ →‎Themes and structure: woman in a nurturing role -> nurturing woman undo

26 May 2021

• curprev 06:0406:04, 26 May 2021‎ 2600:1700:d591:5f10:6988:f684:b468:b7a1 talk‎ 37,347 bytes −2‎ →‎Themes and structure: biology -> alien biology undo
• curprev 05:5505:55, 26 May 2021‎ 2600:1700:d591:5f10:6988:f684:b468:b7a1 talk‎ 37,349 bytes −4‎ →‎Reception and recognition: its plot -> plot undo
• curprev 05:5305:53, 26 May 2021‎ 2600:1700:d591:5f10:6988:f684:b468:b7a1 talk‎ 37,353 bytes +2‎ →‎Reception and recognition undo
• curprev 05:5005:50, 26 May 2021‎ 2600:1700:d591:5f10:6988:f684:b468:b7a1 talk‎ 37,351 bytes −32‎ →‎Reception and recognition: some passages is repeated - changed to only one use of some passages undo

17 May 2021

• curprev 21:5421:54, 17 May 2021‎ 2600:1700:d591:5f10:9423:aaa6:d65e:3995 talk‎ 37,383 bytes −12‎ →‎Reception and recognition: use of language explore -> language use undo
• curprev 18:4218:42, 17 May 2021‎ 2600:1700:d591:5f10:9423:aaa6:d65e:3995 talk‎ 37,395 bytes −28‎ →‎Characterization: simplify phrasing undo
• curprev 05:5605:56, 17 May 2021‎ 2600:1700:d591:5f10:9423:aaa6:d65e:3995 talk‎ 37,423 bytes −8‎ →‎Reception and recognition: simplify sentence undo

7 May 2021

• curprev 19:3019:30, 7 May 2021‎ Citation bot talk contribs‎ 37,431 bytes +38‎ Add: chapter-url, s2cid. Removed or converted URL. | Use this bot. Report bugs. | Suggested by Abductive | #UCB_webform 40/1250 undo

27 April 2021

• curprev 15:2015:20, 27 April 2021‎ Vanamonde93 talk contribs‎ 37,393 bytes −12‎ paraphrasing is preferable to quoting, though undo Tag: Manual revert
• curprev 14:2514:25, 27 April 2021‎ Keesal talk contribs‎ 37,405 bytes +12‎ replaced phrase with a literal quote undo Tag: Reverted

24 April 2021

• curprev 10:4410:44, 24 April 2021‎ Mike Christie talk contribs‎ 37,393 bytes +7‎ Restore earlier form of sentence -- "quest" is too reminiscent of high fantasy undo Tag: Visual edit
• curprev 06:0706:07, 24 April 2021‎ 2600:1700:d591:5f10:75de:67ec:cb9a:e906 talk‎ 37,386 bytes +5‎ Snake to dreamsnake. undo
• curprev 06:0206:02, 24 April 2021‎ 2600:1700:d591:5f10:75de:67ec:cb9a:e906 talk‎ 37,381 bytes +6‎ Add missing word ‘snake’ undo

23 April 2021

• curprev 22:0622:06, 23 April 2021‎ Mike Christie talk contribs‎ 37,375 bytes −471‎ →‎Background and setting: I cut the statement that it's a fix-up, since the fact that it incorporates previously written work has already been stated, so it adds no new information for a reader. The other rewording was to avoid too much repetition of either "novel" or "Dreamsnake". undo Tag: Visual edit
• curprev 22:0022:00, 23 April 2021‎ Mike Christie talk contribs‎ 37,846 bytes −8‎ →‎Background and setting: "writing" is implied since it's a writers' workshop undo Tag: Visual edit
• curprev 21:5821:58, 23 April 2021‎ Mike Christie talk contribs‎ 37,854 bytes +254‎ Undid revision 1019526482 by 2600:1700:D591:5F10:75DE:67EC:CB9A:E906 (talk) Agree with Vanamonde93 that not all of these changes are improvements. Will reimplement some of them after revert undo Tag: Undo
• curprev 20:4220:42, 23 April 2021‎ 2600:1700:d591:5f10:75de:67ec:cb9a:e906 talk‎ 37,600 bytes −254‎ Undid revision 1019518854 by Vanamonde93 (talk) revert. What are the specific meaning changes? The edits were to lighten the repetition of the article. undo Tags: Undo Reverted
• curprev 19:4819:48, 23 April 2021‎ Vanamonde93 talk contribs‎ 37,854 bytes +254‎ I welcome suggestions allowing prose tightening, but these edits have changed the meaning in a number of places, and in others have worsened the flow. Please ''discuss'' the changes you wish to make. undo Tags: Manual revert Reverted
• curprev 17:4217:42, 23 April 2021‎ 2600:1700:d591:5f10:75de:67ec:cb9a:e906 talk‎ 37,600 bytes −11‎ →‎Synopsis: wordiness undo Tag: Reverted
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• curprev 16:3116:31, 23 April 2021‎ 107.197.56.204 talk‎ 37,723 bytes −9‎ →‎Background and setting: correct missing “The novel” from sentence undo Tag: Reverted
• curprev 16:2816:28, 23 April 2021‎ 107.197.56.204 talk‎ 37,732 bytes −4‎ →‎Background and setting: fix typo undo Tag: Reverted
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• curprev 16:2316:23, 23 April 2021‎ 107.197.56.204 talk‎ 37,787 bytes +1‎ →‎Background and setting: add single space undo Tag: Reverted
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