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Talk:2021 West Coast Eagles women's season

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Reviewer: GhostRiver (talk · contribs) 22:13, 13 November 2021 (UTC)[reply]


I'll be taking at this! — GhostRiver 22:13, 13 November 2021 (UTC)[reply]

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Criteria: 1a. prose () 1b. MoS () 2a. ref layout () 2b. cites WP:RS () 2c. no WP:OR () 2d. no WP:CV ()
3a. broadness () 3b. focus () 4. neutral () 5. stable () 6a. free or tagged images () 6b. pics relevant ()
Note: this represents where the article stands relative to the Good Article criteria. Criteria marked are unassessed

Infobox and lede

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  • Good

Background

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  • "2020 was their first year in the AFL Women's competition." → "They began playing in the AFL Women's league during the 2020 season."
  • "mens' team" → "men's team"
  • "continued on being"

Playing list

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Season summary

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  • Quite long without subheads; maybe break up by month like baseball season GAs?
  • "The fixture was revealed on 11 December 2020, however it changed several times after that due to restrictions and border closures caused by the COVID-19 pandemic" → "The planned fixture was revealed on 11 December 2020; continued restrictions and border closures caused by the COVID-19 pandemic, however, forced it to change several times"
  • The way it's currently set up, "reigning premiers" feels a bit WP:EASTEREGGy to me; should mention earlier that Adelaide are the reigning champs
  • "for West Coast. Brianna" → "for West Coast, but three players suffered injuries:"
  • "This meant that" I'm a little confused about what "this" is supposed to mean; is it because it's a Western Derby?
  • "because a knife fell off" → "when a knife fell off"
  • Missing period after "four outs for round 2"
  • "wasn't considered too bad" → "was not considered a total failure"
  • "Parris Laurie and Andrea Gilmore played, after their injuries ended up not being serious" → "Parris Laurie and Andrea Gilmore's injuries were minor enough to allow them to return"
  • was also due to play her first game back from her knee injury, but was a late out due to her knee repetitive phrasing
  • I'm assuming "Grace Kelly" should be targeted towards Grace Kelly (footballer) and not the princess it currently links to

Awards

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  • "Mikayla Bowen was named" → "Bowen was also named"

References

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  • Good!

General comments

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  • Images are properly licensed and relevant
  • Images should be moved slightly to avoid MOS:SANDWICH issues
  • Per MOS:CAPTION, the captions, as full sentences, should end in periods
  • No stability concerns in the revision history
  • Copyvio score looks great at 7.4%

Putting on hold to allow nominator to address comments. Please feel free to ping me with questions, and let me know when you're finished! — GhostRiver 22:58, 13 November 2021 (UTC)[reply]

I have done all changes bar one. See my comment above. Steelkamp (talk) 06:32, 14 November 2021 (UTC)[reply]
I've made the last change myself. Passing now — GhostRiver 16:19, 14 November 2021 (UTC)[reply]