Talk:40-foot radio telescope/GA1

GA Review

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Reviewer: GhostRiver (talk · contribs) 23:07, 10 January 2022 (UTC)[reply]

Hello! I'll be taking a look at this article for the January 2022 GAN backlog drive. If you haven't already signed up, please feel free to join in! Although QPQ is not required, if you're feeling generous, I also have a list of GA nominations of my own right here.

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Criteria: 1a. prose () 1b. MoS () 2a. ref layout () 2b. cites WP:RS () 2c. no WP:OR () 2d. no WP:CV ()

3a. broadness () 3b. focus () 4. neutral () 5. stable () 6a. free or tagged images () 6b. pics relevant ()

Note: this represents where the article stands relative to the Good Article criteria. Criteria marked are unassessed

Infobox and lede

was constructed in 1961, and started observing a selection of variable radio sources in 1961 some way to rephrase so it doesn't repeat the same year?

Specifications

Good

History

"The 40 foot" → "The 40-foot" for internal consistency
In the sentence starting It was delivered in December 1961, I'd clarify that it was delivered to the Green Bank Observatory (with a WL) so that information isn't buried further on
I wouldn't put quotes around "Secondary Science Teachers Institute", as I'm not sure why an organization would have quotes around it

Science

Good

References

References [4] and [14] need an access date

General comments

Image is properly licensed and relevant
No stability concerns in the revision history
Earwig score looks good

Putting on hold to allow nominator to address comments. Please feel free to ping me with questions, and let me know when you're finished! — Ghost River 16:43, 17 January 2022 (UTC)[reply]

@GhostRiver: Thanks for the review! I've addressed those points with this edit - how does that look? Thanks. Mike Peel (talk) 17:06, 17 January 2022 (UTC)[reply]

Article looks good now, happy to pass! — Ghost River 00:06, 18 January 2022 (UTC)[reply]