Talk:All Souls (TV series)/GA1

GA Review

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Reviewer: Bcschneider53 (talk · contribs) 02:46, 21 October 2017 (UTC)

I owe you one for all those game show articles you've reviewed for me. I'll take this on. --Bcschneider53 (talk) 02:46, 21 October 2017 (UTC)

• Thank you! Aoba47 (talk) 03:02, 21 October 2017 (UTC)

GA review (see here for what the criteria are, and here for what they are not)

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1. It is reasonably well written.

   a (prose, no copyvios, spelling and grammar): b (MoS for lead, layout, word choice, fiction, and lists):

2. It is factually accurate and verifiable.

   a (reference section): b (citations to reliable sources): c (OR):

3. It is broad in its coverage.

   a (major aspects): b (focused):

4. It follows the neutral point of view policy.

   Fair representation without bias:

5. It is stable.

   No edit wars, etc.:

6. It is illustrated by images and other media, where possible and appropriate.

   a (images are tagged and non-free content have fair use rationales): b (appropriate use with suitable captions):

7. Overall:

   Pass/Fail:

Lead

• I've been told in the past captions for infobox logos are unnecessary, especially one such as simple as "Title card".

• Removed. Aoba47 (talk) 15:49, 21 October 2017 (UTC)

• "It was cancelled after the remaining four episodes were broadcast." I believe the American spelling is "canceled." While it likely doesn't make a difference either way, perhaps that spelling should be used since this is an American Series?

• Revised. Aoba47 (talk) 15:49, 21 October 2017 (UTC)

Premise

• "The hauntings at All Souls starting during the Civil War, when Dr. Abramson conducted experiments on his patients following the death of his three sons in combat." Seems to me this should be "started" not "starting."

• Revised. Aoba47 (talk) 15:49, 21 October 2017 (UTC)

• "each episode had a self-contained story." Perhaps "each episode had its own self-contained story" would make the individuality more explicit?

• Revised. Aoba47 (talk) 15:49, 21 October 2017 (UTC)

Characters

• No issues.

Production

• Also no issues; I can tell a great deal of work went into this. Great job.

• Thank you! Aoba47 (talk) 15:49, 21 October 2017 (UTC)

Episodes

• Any reason the pilot's ratings have an extra ref?

• Removed one as it was superfluous. Aoba47 (talk) 15:49, 21 October 2017 (UTC)

• In episode five, are the first two athletes' specific sports revealed? I'd include them if they are since you have for the latter three.

• I cannot remember the other two athlete's sports so I have removed the other three for consistency. Aoba47 (talk) 15:49, 21 October 2017 (UTC)

Broadcast history

• "and aired directly after the reality television show Chains of Love." Link to Chains of Love?

• The show was already linked in a previous section. Aoba47 (talk) 15:49, 21 October 2017 (UTC)

• "UPN executives had specified that it was not cancelled at that point." Cancelled vs. canceled again; see my previous note.

• Revised. Aoba47 (talk) 15:49, 21 October 2017 (UTC)

Critical reception

• "The Los Angeles Times' Howard Rosenberg" Rosenberg has an article, perhaps you could link to it?

• Added link. Aoba47 (talk) 15:49, 21 October 2017 (UTC)

• "Rob Own of The Pittsburgh Post-Gazette" It's Owen, and he also has an article.

• Added link. Aoba47 (talk) 15:49, 21 October 2017 (UTC)

References

• Dab and external links look ok.

Just a few minor issues. On hold. --Bcschneider53 (talk) 03:12, 21 October 2017 (UTC)

• @Bcschneider53: Thank you for your review. I believe that I have addressed everything. Have a wonderful rest of your day. Aoba47 (talk) 15:49, 21 October 2017 (UTC)

• @Aoba47: Fantastic work. Pass for GA. Also, if you're interested in reviewing another game show article, I have three in the queue at the moment, though please don't feel obligated to do so. :) --Bcschneider53 (talk) 16:02, 21 October 2017 (UTC)