Talk:Belgium at the 2010 Winter Olympics/GA1

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Reviewer: Nova Crystallis (talk · contribs) 22:11, 22 July 2018 (UTC)

Reviewing later. Nova Crystallis (Talk) 22:11, 22 July 2018 (UTC)

• "into the Vancouver Olympics," Replace comma with colon.

• Done. Courcelles (talk) 14:49, 24 July 2018 (UTC)

• "This was Belgium's first time fielding women in bobsleigh competition." The two women's names should be mentioned here.

• Done. Courcelles (talk) 14:51, 24 July 2018 (UTC)

• "54.09 seconds," Remove comma.

• Done. Courcelles (talk) 14:51, 24 July 2018 (UTC)

• Mollin is misspelled several times.

• Done. Courcelles (talk) 14:56, 24 July 2018 (UTC)

• • Watch out for Van den Bogaert's first name and capitalization.

• Fixed. Courcelles (talk) 14:56, 24 July 2018 (UTC)

• There should be something about Mollin's second run.

• When you record a DNF on run 1, you don't get to make run 2. Courcelles (talk) 14:56, 24 July 2018 (UTC)

• Try not repeating the same words for the beginning of each sentence. For example, "Both".

• Done Courcelles (talk) 14:56, 24 July 2018 (UTC)

• Mention something van der Perren's history in the Olympics.
  • Nice catch, done. Kees08 (Talk)
• "Belgian Olympic and Interfederal Committee" Link in prose needed.
  • Done Kees08 (Talk)
• "in selecting her for the Games. These were her first Olympic Games" Merge to "in selecting her for her first Olympic games."
  • Done Kees08 (Talk)
• Which spelling are you going with here, American or British (meter/metre)?
  • Meter, the only metres I see are in the citations, which they should be since they are the titles of the articles Kees08 (Talk)
• You should try not starting each paragraph with "Gysel".
  • Changed one to He Kees08 (Talk)
• Overlinking to Celski's article.
  • And it's "J.R. Celski".
    • Righto, fixed both. Kees08 (Talk)

Mostly minor things. Nova Crystallis (Talk) 04:55, 24 July 2018 (UTC)