Talk:Brit Asia TV Music Awards
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[edit]- The following is an archived discussion of the DYK nomination of the article below. Please do not modify this page. Subsequent comments should be made on the appropriate discussion page (such as this nomination's talk page, the article's talk page or Wikipedia talk:Did you know), unless there is consensus to re-open the discussion at this page. No further edits should be made to this page.
The result was: promoted by Amkgp (talk) 15:47, 1 October 2020 (UTC)
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... that the Brit Asia TV Music Awards has been held in the United Kingdom since 2010?Source: The Brit Asia TV Music Awards 2010 ceremony was held, Brit Asia TV Music Awards make debut at Birmingham's Symphony Hall
- Reviewed: Battle of Ticinus
Created by Muhandes (talk). Self-nominated at 14:48, 3 September 2020 (UTC).
- This article is new enough and long enough. The hook facts are cited inline, the article is neutral and I detected no copyright issues. A QPQ has been done. Cwmhiraeth (talk) 06:33, 9 September 2020 (UTC)
- Hi, I came by to promote this, but it seems like more a statement of fact than a hook. Could you suggest another angle, perhaps about the way they vote on the winners or another interesting highlight? Thanks, Yoninah (talk) 21:58, 16 September 2020 (UTC)
- @Yoninah: How about
- ALT1
... that the winners of the Brit Asia TV Music Awards, being held in the United Kingdom since 2010, are decided by public voting, from a list of nominees presented by the event organizers at a nomination party?
- or if this is too long we can drop the midsentence
- ALT2
... that the winners of the Brit Asia TV Music Awards are decided by public voting, from a list of nominees presented by the event organizers at a nomination party?
- The source is from every year's nomination party [1] [2] [3] [4] etc. --Muhandes (talk) 05:49, 17 September 2020 (UTC)
- @Muhandes: thanks for the alts. But I'm wondering if there's an even more succinct way to say this, perhaps even just using the word "party" alone as a teaser? Also, this hook fact lacks an inline cite. Yoninah (talk) 13:46, 17 September 2020 (UTC)
- @Yoninah: I added an inline citation. I thought "party" without "nomination party" might be misleading, but if you like to party then maybe
- The source is from every year's nomination party [1] [2] [3] [4] etc. --Muhandes (talk) 05:49, 17 September 2020 (UTC)
- ALT3
... that a party precedes the Brit Asia TV Music Awards, being held in the United Kingdom since 2010?
- Or a more subtle
- ALT4
... that the list of nominees for the Brit Asia TV Music Awards, being held in the United Kingdom since 2010, is presented by the event organizers at a party?
- I'm also open to suggestions. --Muhandes (talk) 09:53, 18 September 2020 (UTC)
- @Muhandes: Let's try something else.
- ALT5: ... that most editions of the annual Brit Asia TV Music Awards
arewere held in Birmingham, which has been called the "Bhangra capital of the world"? Yoninah (talk) 18:59, 22 September 2020 (UTC)
- @Yoninah: ALT5 works for me, though maybe "were held" instead of "are held"? --Muhandes (talk) 09:12, 23 September 2020 (UTC)
- Tweaked, thanks. Pinging original reviewer Cwmhiraeth to review ALT5. Yoninah (talk) 11:47, 23 September 2020 (UTC)
- I'm also open to suggestions. --Muhandes (talk) 09:53, 18 September 2020 (UTC)
- Approving ALT5. Cwmhiraeth (talk) 12:35, 23 September 2020 (UTC)