Talk:Cherry on Top (Bini song)/GA1

GA Review

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Nominator: Royiswariii (talk · contribs) 01:32, 21 September 2024 (UTC)

Reviewer: TheNuggeteer (talk · contribs) 10:31, 21 September 2024 (UTC)

Reviewing this for the GA criteria. 🍗TheNuggeteer🍗 10:31, 21 September 2024 (UTC)

Sadly, I don't think this article fits the GA criteria, because of the complete absence of sections. You can resolve my issues before re-nominating. But you should be careful when re-nominating.

• The lead should have an additional 100 words.
• Background should be longer, you can add the groups activities after 2023.
• Is there more information on the recording? There are only two sentences about the recording, which does not help the current situation.
• Add more information about the lyrics, I see no information about the lyrics.
• Please put Promotion and release after Composition.
• You can list the personnel on a specific section called Personnel, which can be put above charts.
• Are there any certifications awarded to the song? I honestly think a 50-million-viewed video should have some certifications.
• I suggest merging Commercial performance to Critical reception.
• I see two YouTube sources meant for sourcing the promotion, is there any news articles about the promotion to replace the original?
• You can use the template {{Single chart}} to cope the charts.
• to great fan anticipation. This may not meet the NPOV.

🍗TheNuggeteer🍗 23:20, 21 September 2024 (UTC)

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