The text of the entry was: Did you know ... that Cora Agnes Benneson(pictured), one of the first female lawyers in New England, was rejected by Harvard Law School because "the equipments were too limited to make suitable provision for receiving women"?
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ALT1: ... that the then-professor Woodrow Wilson ungenerously called Cora Agnes Benneson(pictured) "a pleasant small person of mind which it will be very hard, but I trust not impossible, to impress"? Source: Go to the Sources, p. 20.
Overall: What a splendid article! You should feel proud of the work you've done here. I have found no problems with the article or hook. I'd prefer ALT0, which I think says more about both the time and her career. --Grnrchst (talk) 18:14, 25 January 2024 (UTC) Grnrchst (talk) 18:14, 25 January 2024 (UTC)[reply]
"under the then-professor Woodrow Wilson." Not an expert on false titles but I think dropping "the" would be neater in this instance as it's a bit difficult to follow on first reading
Done.
"the Massachusetts Governor Frederic T. Greenhalge in 1895" I think Massachusetts can be dropped without confusion
Done.
"Social and Economic Science section in 1900" should this be lowercase?
It's a proper noun, so I've capitalized section as well.
"and as president of the city's board of education for 14 years"
Done.
"including Amos Bronson Alcott and Ralph Waldo Emerson" I would give a brief explanation of who each is
I added that they were writers and philosophers.
"Benneson graduated from the Quincy Seminary" Do we know what level of education this was?
Equivalent to high school.
(Optional) I would be inclined to mention (maybe just in a note) that Harvard did not admit female law students until 1950, to make clear that this wasn't just an issue faced by Benneson. It is my understanding that Michigan was one of the only law schools admitting women at the time
Done.
Perhaps explain what the moot court was, if information is available
WL the words moot court.
"Benneson wrote during her world travels" What did she write? A journal, letters, articles, etc?
I would be inclined to put the information about Almeda Eliza Hitchcock in the body of the article if there is information in the sources
There's not much said, just that Benneson inspired Hitchock, and I don't think it's a particularly meaningful moment in Benneson's life, whereas it was quite obviously important to Hitchock.
5: cites the Friends in Council sentence but I can't see the rest
6: has no issues but I'd add that Quincy Seminary was college preparatory to the article
Done.
8: this is only on page 275 of Nazzal 2000
Changed
11: no issues
18: this is all on page 278
The quote is, but page 279 contains additional analysis of Benneson's views of other cultures.
23: no issues, although I'd mention in the article that she held the position until her death
Done.
29: this doesn't give the date of her death
The obit in The Quincy Daily Herald does, so I consolidated the two cites in that paragraph.
What is the "Essay" parameter in the Jordan 2019 citation?
It's the department parameter. Law journals publish articles, essays, and comments, and this is in the essay section of the journal. See the documentation for {{cite journal}}.
Do we know that the Quincy Academy photo was published pre 1929?
I've changed the tag to PD-unpublished. It appears that this photograph was not published prior to being posted on the Historical Society website post-2003.
@Sammielh: I realized I forgot to respond to note 5. A ref must have somehow gotten moved while I was editing. Fixed that as well and that should be everything. voorts (talk/contributions) 02:03, 8 March 2024 (UTC)[reply]
@Voorts: Looks good! Thanks for all your hard work on this article, promoting now. Sammielh (talk) 07:27, 8 March 2024 (UTC)[reply]