Talk:Crisis (metal band)/GA1

GA Review

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Nominator: Chchcheckit (talk · contribs) 13:47, 8 November 2024 (UTC)

Reviewer: Ca (talk · contribs) 14:23, 1 December 2024 (UTC)

ty!!!!! Chchcheckit (talk) 15:03, 1 December 2024 (UTC)

I will be reviewing this.

Prose

Lead

• ...experimenting with a more accessible version of its sound under the alias Skullsick Nation. I am not sure what "accessible version of its sound" means here. Does it mean it became less avant-garde?

Formation and 8 Convulsions (1993–1994)

• Nasiruddeen also sought to strip down the sound from his previous band Stalwart, which he found "impossible to make [into] a working band", and "turn it into a rock ‘n' roll format band but still use experimentation". Understandable, but reads badly.
• "I asked them to play it real fast. I just jumped around the rehearsal space that first time and we realized that we all connected" Stray quote; needs wording like "Foo said".

Deathshead Extermination and The Hollowing (1995–1997)

• According to Nasiruddeen, the band wanted to "achieve a very organic yet abrasive sound" and experiment with greater dynamics on the album. Clarify what "experiment with greater dynamics" means here.
• Its writing process saw Crisis produce material from jams and rehearsals with Karyn's involvement Ambiguous; Does this mean Crisis was inspired by rehearsals with Karyn or Karyn and Crisis co-wrote it?