Talk:Dovecot at Blackford Farm/GA1
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Reviewer: Miyagawa (talk · contribs) 10:52, 1 March 2015 (UTC)
Grabbing this for a review shortly. Miyagawa (talk) 10:52, 1 March 2015 (UTC)
Ok, time for the review:
- Lead: Does it still contain over 300 nest boxes, did it once contain over 300 nest boxes? I'm only asking because the Dovecot I visited last year at Eastcote has had some significant damage to the inside and no longer contains the shelving that the nest boxes would have sat on.
- Yes the nhle ref says 11 tiers present "said to number 302 in all".— Rod talk 20:34, 1 March 2015 (UTC)
- History: WP:INTEGRITY suggests that it's best to group citations at the following punctuation mark or at the end of the sentence. So I would suggest that cites 6 and 7 are moved to the end of that sentence to stop it from looking cluttered.
- Moved - I tend to do this if the source supports a particular fact rather than everything in the sentence.— Rod talk 20:34, 1 March 2015 (UTC)
- History: Is there a cite for "The building is used as a store by the neighbouring farmer."?
- The McCann book says this so I've reused an existing ref.— Rod talk 20:34, 1 March 2015 (UTC)
That's all the issues I can find. Once you've rectified those, I think this can be marked up as a Good Article. Miyagawa (talk) 20:25, 1 March 2015 (UTC)
- Thanks for your comments.— Rod talk 20:34, 1 March 2015 (UTC)
- Great. Happy to promote, nice job. Miyagawa (talk) 22:45, 1 March 2015 (UTC)