Talk:Festivali i Këngës 60/GA1

GA Review

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Reviewer: K. Peake (talk · contribs) 07:52, 19 January 2022 (UTC)

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Criteria: 1a. prose () 1b. MoS () 2a. ref layout () 2b. cites WP:RS () 2c. no WP:OR () 2d. no WP:CV () 3a. broadness () 3b. focus () 4. neutral () 5. stable () 6a. free or tagged images () 6b. pics relevant () Note: this represents where the article stands relative to the Good Article criteria. Criteria marked are unassessed

I gave you my word and it's been kept!!! --K. Peake 07:52, 19 January 2022 (UTC)

Infobox and lead

• Infobox looks good!
• Pipe Radio Televizioni Shqiptar to RTSH
• "Ronela Hajati with song" → "Ronela Hajati with the song"

Format

• Wikilink Festivali i Këngës
• Pipe Radio Televizioni Shqiptar to RTSH
• The representative for Eurovision Song Contest 2022 part does not appear to be sourced by [1]

New reference [2] added. Iaof2017 (talk) 13:26, 19 January 2022 (UTC)

• "to the prior-year in relation to the" → "to the prior year's out door location due to the" per the source
• Pipe coronavirus disease 2019 to COVID-19

Contestants

• "extending it to 15 October 2021." → "extending it to 15 October." to avoid overusage of the year
• "Ardit Gjebrea, Arta Marku," → "Gjebrea, Arta Marku,"
• Shouldn't you only have a wikilink to the one that is for Elton Deda's native country, rather than three separate ones?
• "to listen on" → "to listen to on"
• The composers and lyricists for both tables are not mentioned by the source

Also new reference [12] added. Iaof2017 (talk) 13:39, 19 January 2022 (UTC)

• Same query regarding wikilinks for Evi Reçi as I mentioned for Deda

Shows

Contestant night

• [12] does not source the entries in the table

New reference [17] Iaof2017 (talk) 13:39, 19 January 2022 (UTC)

Duet night

• "took place on 28 December" → "took place on 28 December 2021"
• "new comers who presented an acoustic version" → "new comers, who presented acoustic version" with the pipe
• [16] does not source the entries in the table

New reference [21] Iaof2017 (talk) 13:39, 19 January 2022 (UTC)

Eurovision night

• The time of the day is not sourced

New reference [23] Iaof2017 (talk) 13:39, 19 January 2022 (UTC)

• Where is it mentioned that she was crowned winner before the contest ended?

That part deleted. Iaof2017 (talk) 13:39, 19 January 2022 (UTC)

• Pipe Albania's representative to Albania in the Eurovision Song Contest 2022
• Wikilink Eurovision Song Contest 2022
• [19] does not source the entries in the table

New reference [27] Iaof2017 (talk) 13:39, 19 January 2022 (UTC)

See also

• Good

References

• Copyvio score looks fantastic at 11.5%!!!
• Pipe Radio Televizioni Shqiptar to RTSH on ref 1
• Cite Euronews Albania as publisher on ref 3
• Cite ESCXtra as publisher on ref 4
• Ref 11 is a duplicate of ref 10
• Fix MOS:QWQ issues with ref 20

Final comments and verdict

•  On hold until all of the issues are fixed, after I completed this quick one! --K. Peake 09:24, 19 January 2022 (UTC)

Hi Kyle Peake thank you for keeping your promise and the review! I believe I've addressed most of your concerns. Let me know if I missed anything. Cheers! Iaof2017 (talk) 13:42, 19 January 2022 (UTC)

Iaof2017 Really happy with this quick response, though you forgot to pipe Radio Televizioni Shqiptar to RTSH in the lead and do the same on the first instance in the body. --K. Peake 22:21, 19 January 2022 (UTC)

Kyle Peake, done. :) Iaof2017 (talk) 22:31, 19 January 2022 (UTC)

Iaof2017 I appreciate this effort, but you have misunderstood the suggestion; I meant to still write Radio Televizioni Shqiptar (RTSH) in the lead on the first occasion in the body, but with the pipe to the article as I have done here. --K. Peake 07:36, 20 January 2022 (UTC)

Opps Kyle Peake, my mind was somewhere else. Fixed now. Iaof2017 (talk) 12:42, 20 January 2022 (UTC)

Iaof2017 ✓ Pass time, there were a few publisher parameters left unfixed but I resolved this for you because it is clear you got what I meant overall. Congrats on yet another GA; are you considering a GT for this festival? --K. Peake 13:46, 20 January 2022 (UTC)

Thank you so so much Kyle Peake. Looking forward for upcoming reviews if god wills. Cheers! Iaof2017 (talk) 19:42, 20 January 2022 (UTC)