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GA Review

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Reviewer: Hog Farm (talk · contribs) 18:56, 26 May 2020 (UTC)[reply]

Criteria

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1. Prose  On hold

2. Verifiability  On hold

3. Depth of Coverage  Pass

4. Neutral  Pass

5. Stable  Pass

6. Illustrations  Pass

7. Miscellaneous  Pass

Comments

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  • " facing Multnomah County Courthouse along Southwest 4th" - Should it be "facing the Multnomah County Courthouse along Southwest 4th"
  • Link limestone in the text and the infobox
  • " 2.3 m × 1.6 m × 0.79 m (89 in × 63 in × 31 in)" - This is from the infobox. Given that this article is written in American English, shouldn't the American-style units be first, and then the metric units?
  • To select a design, a city competition was announced in January 1914, with $450 appropriated for a fountain "to be executed in bronze and stone; contestants were required to submit "front and side elevations, section and plan" using "simple monotone wash renderings or pen and ink" - I count three open paranthesis, but only two close parantheses.
  • On February 13, an auxiliary meeting was held for "all present members and all women who joined at the time of the close of the war or since that time... whether they are members now or not,[7][10] so final arrangements could be made - There's only the open paranthesis, where's the close one?
  • "He said the war memorials sustained graffiti, which was removed by veterans within the group of occupiers, and confirmed all the public artworks on the site had received no major damage, as of late November" - Occupy Portland ended in December, is there a source that reflects the entire span of the event, confirming that no major damage occurred during the entire span?

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