Talk:Gallbladder/GA1
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Reviewer: Casliber (talk · contribs) 02:27, 29 September 2017 (UTC)
I'll take a look and make straightforward copyedits as I go and jot queries below: Cas Liber (talk · contribs) 02:27, 29 September 2017 (UTC)
Mention in the lead that it is hollow or sac-shaped or something similar.- The gallbladder and bile have symbolic and cultural meanings in English and other languages. - err, rather nebulous sentence that doesn't add anything. I'd remove it.
Anatomically, the gallbladder is divided into three sections: - does the first word here add any meaning? (i.e. would any be lost if it were removed?)- The gallbladder wall is composed of a number of layers. - err, why not just say how many there are?
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Underneath the epithelia...- should be "epithelium" or "epithelial layer" - The number and structure of the gallbladder may vary. - redundant as covered in following sentences.
- Occasionally two or even three gallbladders may coexist - some estimation of incidence would be good.
- Not done too rare to mention; any such statistics would be meaningless owing to the way they are compiled (we would need to do population autopsies to get an accurate prevalance).--Tom (LT) (talk) 09:19, 23 October 2017 (UTC)
The main purpose of the gallbladder is to store bile, also called gall, needed for the digestion of food. The gallbladder is part of the biliary system and serves as a reservoir for bile, which is produced by the liver. The liver produces the bile, which then flows through the hepatic ducts into the gallbladder. - there is repetition in these three sentences - storing bile, being produced in the liver. Need to remove repeated bits and reword.The first two sentences of the Inflammation section are repeating info from the section preceding. They need to be trimmed as the definitions have already happened- In general, avoid one-sentence paras wherever possible
Remove Porcelain gallbladder from see also and add as a one- or two-sentence item to somewhere in the body of the text (my favoured destination would be Imaging by YMMV).- The Society and culture section is choppy - last sentence needs a ref.
The gallbladder has also been known as the biliary vesicle or cholecyst. - these are obviously archaic terms so some dates would be good.The History section would greatly benefit with development of when people realised what the gallbladder did - e.g. what did Classical physicians think it did (medieval/Egyptians etc.)
- Review the items in External links against WP:EL.
- Done preserved one link per WP:RICHMEDIA--Tom (LT) (talk) 10:13, 23 October 2017 (UTC)
- Review the items in External links against WP:EL.
I have listed a few things but I think they are eminently fixable. Not too far off GA-hood. cheers, Cas Liber (talk · contribs) 03:42, 29 September 2017 (UTC)
@Casliber, oh bugger. I was expecting this would be reviewed mid next year (I usually have to wait at least 6-9 months before my reviews get picked up) and was planning to do some more work on the lead and history sections and also finish citing and correcting some statements in the meantime. I figured I will nominate in the meantime so that my sources are all fresh in my mind when the review happens. I will also be away over this long weekend. Could we resume this review in about 2 weeks? I'll try to address as much as I can so as to not waste your time picking up things during the review. --Tom (LT) (talk) 08:03, 29 September 2017 (UTC)
- Tom (LT) There is absolutely no hurry. It's important to get these ones right so am happy to leave this open for a few weeks until you can focus on it. Cas Liber (talk · contribs) 10:40, 29 September 2017 (UTC)
- Thanks. Have been working on the article as you can see, but still Doing... --Tom (LT) (talk) 08:20, 23 October 2017 (UTC)
- @Casliber thanks for your patience and comments above. Have finished responding. --Tom (LT) (talk) 08:30, 25 October 2017 (UTC)
- Ok, I still have a problem with "The gallbladder and bile have symbolic and cultural meanings in English and other languages" as it really needs an example or two (in the lead). I'd be good if you could add to the Society and culture section too - you say, "Numerous words in the English language relate to the gallbladder and the bile that it stores." but list only two...which doesn't strike me as numerous. Cas Liber (talk · contribs) 14:02, 25 October 2017 (UTC)
- @Casliber thanks for your patience and comments above. Have finished responding. --Tom (LT) (talk) 08:30, 25 October 2017 (UTC)
- Thanks. Have been working on the article as you can see, but still Doing... --Tom (LT) (talk) 08:20, 23 October 2017 (UTC)
- Tom (LT) There is absolutely no hurry. It's important to get these ones right so am happy to leave this open for a few weeks until you can focus on it. Cas Liber (talk · contribs) 10:40, 29 September 2017 (UTC)
1. Well written?:
- Prose quality:
- Manual of Style compliance:
2. Factually accurate and verifiable?:
- References to sources: (Earwig's copyvio clear)
- Citations to reliable sources, where required:
- No original research:
3. Broad in coverage?:
- Major aspects:
- Focused:
4. Reflects a neutral point of view?:
- Fair representation without bias:
5. Reasonably stable?
- No edit wars, etc. (Vandalism does not count against GA):
6. Illustrated by images, when possible and appropriate?:
- Images are copyright tagged, and non-free images have fair use rationales:
- Images are provided where possible and appropriate, with suitable captions:
Overall:
- Pass or Fail: - all in order,
bar one thing - that it'd be good if the File:Biliary system multilingual.svg had a source for the information. This could involve just checking with one of the anatomy textbooks and then documenting the information is consistent with it. Cas Liber (talk · contribs) 05:35, 29 October 2017 (UTC)