Talk:Gento (song)/GA1

GA Review

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Reviewer: K. Peake (talk · contribs) 15:40, 30 July 2023 (UTC)

1. It is reasonably well written.

   a. (prose, spelling, and grammar):

   b. (MoS for lead, layout, word choice, fiction, and lists):

2. It is factually accurate and verifiable.

   a. (reference section):

   b. (citations to reliable sources):

   c. (OR):

   d. (copyvio and plagiarism):

3. It is broad in its coverage.

   a. (major aspects):

   b. (focused):

4. It follows the neutral point of view policy.

   Fair representation without bias:

5. It is stable.

   No edit wars, etc.:

6. It is illustrated by images and other media, where possible and appropriate.

   a. (images are tagged and non-free content have non-free use rationales):

   b. (appropriate use with suitable captions):

7. Overall:

   Pass/fail:

(Criteria marked are unassessed)

I will handle this as my first review for the GAN backlog! --K. Peake 15:40, 30 July 2023 (UTC)

Infobox and lead

• Replace hlist with bullet points per Template:Infobox song  Partly done by Vaughan J. – see below.

• Came to fix the infobox only for this review. I'm leaving all the other stuff for the nominator to do. I changed all the hlists, except the language parameter, as it shows dot points. — VAUGHAN J. (TALK) 06:21, 31 July 2023 (UTC)

• Should EDM really be listed under genres in the infobox when it is only the breaks? N Removed by Vaughan J.
• Pipe John Paulo Nase to Pablo (musician)  Done
• Mention in the first sentence that it was recorded for their second extended play, Pagtatag!  Partly done

  Opted for "..., taken from their second extended play (EP), Pagtatag! (2023)." instead.

• Swap the release and writing/production sentences around  Done
• "as the lead single from..." → "as the lead single from the album"  Done

  I replaced "album" to "EP" instead.

• The trials part does not appear to be sourced  Done

  Removed

• "lyricism and SB19's vocals and versatility." → "lyricism, SB19's vocals, and the versatility."  Done
• "peaking at number" → "peaking at numbers"  Done

Background and release

• Should the tour be introduced as their second concert tour or first worldwide tour per the source?  Done

  I introduced it as the first world tour instead.

• "revealed that the boy band" → "revealed that SB19"  Done
• "It marks the boy band's" → "It marked the boy band's"  Done
• Remove commas around Pagisbol  Done
• "The boy band announced that the EP" → "SB19 announced that Pagtatag!"  Done
• "although they didn't reveal" → "although they did not reveal"  Done
• "and was made available for" → "and it was made available for"  Done

Composition and lyrics

• "which featured strong" → "which features strong"  Done
• "by himself while he" → "by himself, while he"  Done
• "Servida had worked with" → "Servida had previously worked with" and remove the first ep introduction  Done
• "others describe the song as" → "others described the song as"  Done
• "The song featured clapping sounds" → "The song features clapping sounds"  Done
• "It included a message about" → "It includes a message about"  Done
• "which was utilized along with" → "which is utilized along with"  Done

Reception

• "is described as" → "was described as"  Done
• "it did not affect the song's message," → "it did not affect the message,"  Done
• "the song highlights the boy band's" → "the song highlights SB19's"  Done
• Pipe music charts to Billboard charts  Done

Promotion

• Img looks good!
• Mention the quarry is large per the source  Done
• "after its release." → "after being released."  Done
• "John Legaspi of" → "John Legaspi of the" but where is "bop" sourced?  Done

  His comment was mentioned in the second paragraph: "Now with over four million views, the song clip, which is a total bop ..." Although I may have possibly taken it out of context.

• Add a comma after Wish 107.5 Bus  Done
• "The boy band embarked on" → "They embarked on"  Done

Controversy

• "the music industry? It's" → "the music industry? [...] It's" per the source  Done
• "the boy band was criticized online" → "SB19 was criticized online"  Done

Credits and personnel

• Use {{spaced ndash}} so there is the right space between credits and personnel  Done
• Pipe John Paulo Nase to Pablo (musician)  Done

Charts

• Good

References

• Copyvio score looks great at 25%!!
• Remove or replace ref 20 per WP:FORBES  Done

Final comments and verdict

•  On hold until all of the issues are fixed; this should be done soon! --K. Peake 20:27, 30 July 2023 (UTC)

  Thank you for allotting time for my first GAN! I'll make sure to address everything right away. – Abacusada (t • c) 06:35, 31 July 2023 (UTC)

  @Kyle Peake: Thank you for your valuable comments! I have addressed all of them. Let me know if there is anything else to be carried out. Thanks! – Abacusada (t • c) 09:47, 31 July 2023 (UTC)

  ✓ Pass now, briefly copy edited but this is now good to go! --K. Peake 09:25, 1 August 2023 (UTC)

  Thanks a lot for your help! – Abacusada (t • c) 11:59, 1 August 2023 (UTC)

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