Talk:GetItRight/GA2

GA Review

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Reviewer: Aoba47 (talk · contribs) 20:22, 15 March 2017 (UTC)[reply]

Comments

I would combine the second and third sentences of the lead’s first paragraph to the following as the sentences read a little choppy in their current wording: Written and produced by Pharrell Williams, it is a pop-funk song that lyrically discusses sexual desire.
The phrase “the lead single from the album” should be revised to “the album’s lead single” to consolidate the wording.
Please revise/expand the final sentence of the lead to include information about the other live performances of the song.
Clarify the meaning “that May” by adding the year or simply removing the reference to the date as it is not entirely necessary.
Please complete the “Media date and Non-free use rationale” table for the audio sample.
While this does not need to be addressed at the GA level, I would just caution you to be careful about over-relying on quotes and to paraphrase more if you want to work on this more in the future.
Clarify the meaning of “(of all sizes)”.
The phrasing “decked out with” seems too informal. I would revise it with stronger language.

Final comments.

Great job with the article. Once my comments are addressed, I will pass this. Aoba47 (talk) 22:58, 15 March 2017 (UTC)[reply]

Cool, thank you for your prompt responses. Everything seems to be in order. It is a very solid article and I ✓ Pass it as a GA. Aoba47 (talk) 13:42, 16 March 2017 (UTC)[reply]