Talk:HMS Menace (1915)
HMS Menace (1915) is currently a Warfare good article nominee. Nominated by simongraham (talk) at 21:30, 25 May 2024 (UTC) An editor has indicated a willingness to review the article in accordance with the good article criteria. Further reviews are welcome from any editor who has not contributed significantly to this article (or nominated it), and can be added to the review page, but the decision whether or not to list the article as a good article should be left to the first reviewer. Short description: British M-Class destroyer |
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Nominator: Simongraham (talk · contribs) 21:30, 25 May 2024 (UTC)
Reviewer: Sturmvogel 66 (talk · contribs) 17:55, 26 May 2024 (UTC)
I'll get to this shortly--Sturmvogel 66 (talk) 17:55, 26 May 2024 (UTC)
- Image appropriately licensed
- Link launched in the lede
- Added link.
- but recorded no hits Suggest changing this to "made a series of unsuccessful attacks" earlier in the sentence
- Moved.
- It transpired that the German warships did not exist. Awkward. Suggest integrating this into the sentence about why the extra speed was desired
- Amended.
- What are the boilers feeding to the turbines?
- Clarified.
- Add the sale date to the infobox
- Added.
- comma after Strongbow--Sturmvogel 66 (talk) 11:38, 17 June 2024 (UTC)
- Clarified.
@Sturmvogel 66: Thank you for this review. I believe the changes are made. simongraham (talk) 08:16, 19 June 2024 (UTC)
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