Talk:Herb Plews/GA1

GA Review

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Reviewer: Hog Farm (talk · contribs) 04:18, 16 May 2020 (UTC)

Criteria

1. Prose ✓ Pass

2. Verifiability ✓ Pass

3. Depth of Coverage ✓ Pass

4. Neutral ✓ Pass

5. Stable ✓ Pass

6. Illustrations ✓ Pass

7. Miscellaneous ✓ Pass

Comments

1.

• "as a result of the war just ending" - Go ahead and specify the war
• Link stolen base at first appearance

2.

• "Plews hit his first (and only) home run of the season against Bob Keegan as the Senators won 6–2" - I'm not explicitly seeing in the source that it was his only home run of the season, although I'm sure it's true. Is there a way you can add another source for certain verification?
• " at "1953 Piedmont League Batting Leaders". Baseball-Reference. Retrieved May 8, 2020." - Is there a specific reason the word "at" is in there?

3.

• "At his death, he was the only athlete from the Helena area to play Major League Baseball.[2][1]" - This implies that there has been another person from the Helena area to make it to the majors. If so, it's probably worth briefly mentioning the player's name.
  • There aren't any others that I know of, but the source is from when Plews died five years ago, so it's not current for the last few years. That's why I worded it that way. Sanfranciscogiants17 (talk) 13:24, 18 May 2020 (UTC)

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The article's in very good shape, just a few loose ends to take care of. Placing on hold. Hog Farm (talk) 21:20, 17 May 2020 (UTC)

Passing. Hog Farm (talk) 15:01, 18 May 2020 (UTC)