Talk:Ineza Umuhoza Grace

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There is a point about external links used inline. This is against Wikipedia's basic house style - see WP:ELPOINTS #2.

For example where it is written

She is the CEO of [https://www.thegreenprotector.org/ The Green Protector]

that should be changed first to

She is the CEO of The Green Protector[https://www.thegreenprotector.org/]

and then the external link should be turned into a footnote with {{cite web}}, as

She is the CEO of The Green Protector<ref>{{cite web |title=The Green Protector – Friends of the Environment |url=https://www.thegreenprotector.org/ |website=www.thegreenprotector.org}}</ref>

The draft currently doesn't have a footer for references: it should be added at the bottom, as

==References==
{{reflist}}

On the content, there is some good referenced material. Some of the text should be revised to get the right Wikipedia tone, which is understated.

There are some further references that can be found in Google News, for example https://www.newtimes.co.rw/article/6216/news/environment/one-environmentalists-drive-to-get-youth-to-be-climate-actors which states her age.

Charles Matthews (talk) 08:45, 18 April 2023 (UTC)[reply]

Working on draft

@Kpalmtree14: Your sandbox article draft has been moved here, for further development. In a few days time, I may start working on it. You can of course work on it yourself. You are an autoconfirmed user, meaning that you now have the Move button on the Tools menu. In due course I'll move this draft into the main article space, when I think it is of the right standard. You can also do that yourself. Charles Matthews (talk) 09:08, 27 July 2023 (UTC)[reply]