Talk:It's All About You (Juliana Pasha song)/GA1
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Reviewer: MarioSoulTruthFan (talk · contribs) 14:43, 23 April 2020 (UTC)
Infobox
[edit]- Needs alt
- Release date, format and label → unsourced
- @MarioSoulTruthFan: I couldn't find anything about the digital release, should I only add the music video release date?--Lorik17 (talk) 21:33, 24 April 2020 (UTC)
- @Iaof2017: No, I found UK date and the Huffpost source says "In March, when she debuted the English-language version of her Eurovision entry". So perhaps create a release history section with a box add these dates and I will give you a hand. On the infobox add the UK date, unless you can find another one. MarioSoulTruthFan (talk) 23:14, 24 April 2020 (UTC)
- @MarioSoulTruthFan: Ok, that's great, thank you! --Lorik17 (talk) 23:26, 24 April 2020 (UTC)
- @Iaof2017: No, I found UK date and the Huffpost source says "In March, when she debuted the English-language version of her Eurovision entry". So perhaps create a release history section with a box add these dates and I will give you a hand. On the infobox add the UK date, unless you can find another one. MarioSoulTruthFan (talk) 23:14, 24 April 2020 (UTC)
- @MarioSoulTruthFan: I couldn't find anything about the digital release, should I only add the music video release date?--Lorik17 (talk) 21:33, 24 April 2020 (UTC)
Done
Lead
[edit]- song recorded by Albanian → song by Albanian
- You don't need the first reference is already below
- The English-language uptempo-pop song lyrically makes reference to her Christian faith honoring the bond between a woman and her god.[2] → needs to be in the compostion section in a diferent parapragh from the background, the refence should only be there ad not in the lead of the article
- Reference 3 and 4 are smiliar below on the body of the article saying the same, if so remove them
- Needs to mention chart, release date, formart, label and music video
- Add genre, lyrical contente and composition
Done
Background and composition
[edit]- As the master version, "It's All About You" was composed by Albanian producer Ardit Gjebrea and written by Gjebrea together with Albanian musician Pirro Çako → second paragraph along with the mention of te lyrics of the lead
Done
Music videos and promotion
[edit]- Music videos? Is that a typo or there is anotehr music video?
- Remove the Youtube source, you have a better one.
Done
At Eurovision
[edit]- As of the Eurovision rules, → According to the Eurovision rules,
- Big 5 → who are?
- reached sixteenth place → reached the sixteenth place
Done
Charts
[edit]- Remove the "sortable plainrowheaders" → is only one chart
Done
References
[edit]- Eurovisiton. tv → remove + publisher is European Broadcasting Union + capital letter in the first word
- huffpost.com → Huffington Post + wikilink
- esctoday.com → ESC Today+ publisher
- botasot.info → remove
Done
Overall
[edit]- Create external link section and add the music video there
- Remove language when its english
- Reference 9 is missing author, refernece 16 and 17 show no results.
- You can now address the issues. MarioSoulTruthFan (talk) 18:07, 24 April 2020 (UTC)
Done