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POV

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"The main protagonist Jassi was an ugly bespectacled nerd with braces over her teeth and a weird style of dressing. It chronicled her in her workplace and how she wins the hearts of her colleagues and her boss mainly due to her warm and humorous nature and is plotted gainst by her superior Mallika who feels insecure about her post."

Sounds very POV to me. Second opinion? Thadius856 21:31, 3 October 2006 (UTC)[reply]

I agree with Thadius, thoose lines sound as POV. First of all, Armaan doesnt like her because of that- he was playing around so that she stays and runs the company-, he like her later on for some reason, but it certainly isnt whaich those lines state- i am sure of that.

I would like to say that who ever wrote that, is using many hard words. Since like i wrote alomst the entire article,I know it was bad, but she has made it sound weird. I had many important details which she has deleted.

WRITING STYLE

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What the heck is this? Did somebody just text this in? This has to be the ABSOLUTE WORST article in Wikipedia. In any language!!

At least the person tried to write the story- wikipedia i am sorry for writing it not in a goog way but i wanted to summarize what happened

Tagged for tone

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The above comment is a bit harsh, but it's true that the article lacks the right tone. I've tagged it as such. If whoever wrote the synopsis is still here, thanks for such a detailed summary, anyway! One of the most major issues, though, is the "cliffhanger" ending, which I've removed. Could you, or someone else who knows how the show ends, please add a summary of how the show ends? Thanks! Tozoku 01:31, 9 March 2007 (UTC)[reply]

The writing style is bad and does not match Wikipedia standards. This article requires serious editing. —Preceding unsigned comment added by 98.242.65.200 (talk) 09:55, 15 July 2008 (UTC)[reply]

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