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Mckercher, bob, and du cros, hilary. 2002. Cultural Tourism : The Partnership Between Tourism and Cultural Heritage Management. Florence: Routledge. Accessed January 19, 2019. ProQuest Ebook Central.

Cros, Hilary Du. "A New Model to Assist in Planning for Sustainable Cultural Heritage Tourism." International Journal of Tourism Research3, no. 2 (March 3, 2001): 165-70. Accessed January 19, 2019. doi:10.1002/jtr.297.

Mckercher, Bob, Pamela S.y. Ho, and Hilary Du Cros. "Relationship between Tourism and Cultural Heritage Management: Evidence from Hong Kong." Tourism Management26, no. 4 (August 1, 2005): 539-48. Accessed January 19, 2019. doi:10.1016/j.tourman.2004.02.018.

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Overall I would say this is a great start to a Wiki article. The lead is concise yet informative and the other sections are organized in an easy to follow manner. A decent amount of information has been added so far, the tone is neutral, and the references look good. Small points that could be improved are mostly grammar and sentence structure. There is a typo in the sentence appearing in the 'education' section and in the 'career' section the first sentence is awkward. The two halves of the sentence don't appear to go together. I would also recommend adding links to specific publications in addition to the information in the 'publications' section. Apart from those small things this looks excellent so far.

Inquisitive Siren (talk) 07:23, 3 February 2019 (UTC)Aloura[reply]