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Reviewer: 12george1 (talk · contribs) 22:41, 3 January 2019 (UTC)[reply]

Hello, TheSandDoctor. I will be reviewing this article today.

  • I think the lead section is rather short considering all of the content in the body of the article and how well known he is. Compare it to the Mick Jagger intro section. That mentions a bit about his life before the Rolling Stones, his induction into the Rock and Roll and UK Music halls of fame, how well his songs have performed on the charts, some of his acting, his side projects, and a short blurb about his personal life
  • Speaking of the lead section, there are four songs mentioned as his notable guitar riffs. However, a fifth song definitely needs to be mentioned: (I Can't Get No) Satisfaction. The riff for that song is not only one of his most notable, but among the most notable throughout all of rock
Definitely.  Done --TheSandDoctor Talk 23:43, 3 January 2019 (UTC)[reply]
  • One of the biggest problems I have with this article is that there are a number of places without citations. There's even one place with a [citation needed] tag. I'm not sure if you really need citations for his Guest appearances or Lead vocals on Rolling Stones tracks, but there's definitely places that lack sources and need them
  • I think the article should include more details about the times he's escaped death. Here are some examples
@12george1: Where would you recommend including this in the article? --TheSandDoctor Talk 00:22, 8 January 2019 (UTC)[reply]
I found a better source for such an addition Rolling Stone --TheSandDoctor Talk 00:32, 8 January 2019 (UTC)[reply]
  • Now, for the part about his drug use (top of Public image and private life section). WatchMojo.com, which has one of the largest channels on YouTube, listed Richards as number 1 on their "Top 10 Musicians Who Surprisingly Didn't Die From Drugs" video. I think that's worthy of a mention. They cite his trials, falling out of a tree, and snorting his father's ashes. You've already mentioned all of that in later parts of the article, so you don't have to twice
@12george1: I don't know how comfortable I am with citing a YouTube channel as a non-primary source. As a side note, I didn't realize that WatchMojo was Canadian. --TheSandDoctor Talk 00:22, 8 January 2019 (UTC)[reply]
  • I have a question about the Musical equipment section. Did you write that in your owns words? According to this, much of that section is suspected of copyvio. It could just be a mirror site, so I don't want to outright accuse you of plagiarism
@12george1: I am not sure what exactly "fandalism.com" is, and it could be a mirror site. I appreciate you not instantly failing that as I did not write that section. I checked the revision just before I ever touched the article and, sure enough, it was still there. Turns out that, while I didn't write it, I hadn't found my first edit to the article. I am not really sure where it was added, but it was after I first edited the page. Most of my work with the article was improving references. I will address the other concerns first while I try to figure out who is copying who exactly. It could also have been copied from a mirror copying us, but that is just a guess at this point as I have yet to dig into it. --TheSandDoctor Talk 00:00, 4 January 2019 (UTC); corrected 00:57, 4 January 2019 (UTC)[reply]
@12george1: That is strange, when I visit the link it is just a page with a blank box - not any content which Earwig pulls up. I checked the HTML and it is also lacks it. I am not sure where Earwig is pulling that from.... (take a look here) --TheSandDoctor Talk 00:46, 4 January 2019 (UTC)[reply]
  • From this point forward, I'm going to quote this ref in case the numbering changes after you add more references.
  • "CBC Music". Archived from the original on 1 March 2016" - The publication may be called "CBC Music", but that's not the title and you need the publication date and an accessdate
 Done All added. It turns out that I was also able to bring the link "back to life" as they had just changed their URL format. --TheSandDoctor Talk 01:53, 4 January 2019 (UTC)[reply]
  • For "Chuck Berry, Keith Richards (1986). Hail! Hail! Rock 'n' Roll (DVD released 2006). Universal City Studios Inc.", you need to reformat the names so then you have last name and then first name to match the other references
 Done --TheSandDoctor Talk 01:53, 4 January 2019 (UTC)[reply]
  • "The Recording Academy. 2004 Best Reggae Album. Grammy.com. Web. 2004. <"Archived copy". Archived from the original on 20 December 2016. Retrieved 3 December 2016.>. Retrieved 2016-12-03." - Why the extra brackets and why is it title "Archived copy"? Also, get rid of the "Web."
 Done I'm not sure, that was added long before I was an editor. The link didn't take you to a page that could verify anything either, so I have replaced the reference with the correct link. --TheSandDoctor Talk 01:10, 4 January 2019 (UTC)[reply]
  • "musicpilgrimages.com". musicpilgrimages.com. 11 October 2009. Archived from the original on 14 July 2011. Retrieved 15 October 2010." - The title should be "Mick goes to jail"
 Done --TheSandDoctor Talk 23:48, 3 January 2019 (UTC)[reply]
  • "musicpilgrimages.com". musicpilgrimages.com. 14 October 2009. Archived from the original on 14 July 2011. Retrieved 15 October 2010 - This one should be titled "Keith goes to jail"
 Done --TheSandDoctor Talk 23:48, 3 January 2019 (UTC)[reply]
  • "Thorpe, Vanessa (25 October 2015). "I owe it all to my mum's impeccable taste in music says rocker Keith Richards". theguardian.com. Archived from the original on 25 October 2015. Retrieved 25 October 2015." - The publication should be called "The Guardian", not "theguardian.com"
 Done --TheSandDoctor Talk 23:50, 3 January 2019 (UTC)[reply]
  • "8 pop stars and their strange food obsessions",BBC Music,12/1/2017" - (1. more spacing (2. Reformat the date for consistency purposes. By the way, it has been changed to 12 January 2017 - My bad. I read the original date as 2007 for some reason, but you should still reformat it (3. Add McAlpine, Fraser as the author (4. Add accessdate
  • ""Keith Richards: Rap Is for 'Tone-Deaf People'". Rolling Stone. Retrieved 24 March 2018." - Needs the publication date (3 September 2015) and name of the author (Blistein, Jon)
 Done --TheSandDoctor Talk 23:53, 3 January 2019 (UTC)[reply]
  • ""Keith Richards blasts heavy metal, rap in interview". Archived from the original on 25 December 2015." - Ditto with the publication date (3 September 2016) and the name of the author (Farber, Jim). The title has also changed ("Rolling Stones guitarist Keith Richards calls Metallica and Black Sabbath 'great jokes,' says rap is for 'tone-deaf people' in free-wheeling interview")
 Done Updated ref, added. Thanks for pointing that out. --TheSandDoctor Talk 01:53, 4 January 2019 (UTC)[reply]
  • "Mundinteractivos. "El retrato de Keith Richards que inspiró a Johnny Depp, expuesto en una galería de Londres – elmundo.es". Archived from the original on 16 August 2016" - Needs a publication date (31 October 2006). Add the parameter "language=es". "elmundo.es" should not be part of the title, though it is the publication
 Done --TheSandDoctor Talk 00:18, 8 January 2019 (UTC)[reply]
  • "Depp, Richards Light Up Spike TV's 'Scream 2009". Associated Press. 18 October 2009. Archived from the original on 15 January 2009." - USA Today and the author (Cohen, Sandy) also need to be credited
 Done --TheSandDoctor Talk 00:18, 8 January 2019 (UTC)[reply]
  • "Toots and the Maytals: Reggae Got Soul". BBC Four (documentary). Directed by George Scott. UK. 2011. 59 min. Retrieved 15 December 2016. <"Archived copy". Archived from the original on 20 May 2016. Retrieved 2 May 2017.>" - Again with the brackets. No need to mention the UK or that it's 59 minutes long. Shouldn't the title be "Toots and the Maytals: Reggae Got Soul", not "Archived copy"?
 Done I am not sure why someone kept adding those. Removed. --TheSandDoctor Talk 01:03, 4 January 2019 (UTC)[reply]
  • "Tootsandthemaytals. "Toots & The Maytals – Reggae Got Soul – Documentary Trailer." YouTube. YouTube, 15 August 2013. Web. 15 December 2016. <"Archived copy". Archived from the original on 11 May 2017. Retrieved 2 May 2017.>" - Ditto with the brackets and the "Archived copy" thing. No need to mention YouTube twice or "Web."
 Done --TheSandDoctor Talk 01:03, 4 January 2019 (UTC)[reply]
  • " [1] – IrelandOn-Line Archived 12 November 2013 at the Wayback Machine." - There's no title, no publication date, and no accessdate. Also, why did you wait this long to mention the Wayback Machine?
 Done @12george1: I have added to it. The link is dead, but the archive indicates that an author was never named. I am happy to also remove this reference entirely as Rolling Stone is more reputable anyways. It is worth noting though that the "Wayback Machine" being at the end is per Template:Webarchive and not the style choice of whoever added it (not me). --TheSandDoctor Talk 02:02, 4 January 2019 (UTC)[reply]
  • "Holden, Stephen. "The Pop Life". New York Times. Archived from the original on 15 January 2009. Retrieved 28 June 2014." - Publication date needed (12 October 1988)
 Done --TheSandDoctor Talk 01:23, 4 January 2019 (UTC)[reply]
  • "Epiphone News: Rolling Stones at 50". Epiphone.com. Archived from the original on 5 March 2012." - Ditto (3 February 2012)
 Done --TheSandDoctor Talk 01:23, 4 January 2019 (UTC)[reply]
  • "Leonard, Michael. "Satisfaction Guaranteed: Keith Richards' Favorite Gibsons". Gibson.com. Archived from the original on 13 December 2016. Retrieved 18 September 2017." - Again (12 July 2012)
 Done --TheSandDoctor Talk 01:23, 4 January 2019 (UTC)[reply]
  • "Drozdowski, Ted (18 September 2017). "Exile Week: Exile on Main Street and the Gibson Les Paul Standard Dynasty of Keith Richards and Mick Taylor". Gibson.com. Archived from the original on 31 January 2013." - Add accessdate
 Done It appears that the "date" was actually intended to be the access date (was 7 years later than the piece's listed 2010 pub date), so I swapped them. --TheSandDoctor Talk 01:23, 4 January 2019 (UTC)[reply]
  • "Through The Years, Clearly: Dan Armstrong Series". Archived from the original on 26 March 2012. Retrieved 23 March 2012." - Missing publisher
 Done --TheSandDoctor Talk 01:23, 4 January 2019 (UTC)[reply]
  • ""Keith Richards' Guitar Tech Reveals Keef's Studio Rig". 29 October 2015. Archived from the original on 8 December 2015" - Ditto. Also, add the author's name
 Done --TheSandDoctor Talk 01:23, 4 January 2019 (UTC)[reply]
  • "(Spoilers): Did anyone notice this easter egg during the flashback scene? • r/piratesofthecaribbean". reddit." - Can you find a source better than Reddit, especially since this seems to just be a random user (correct me if I'm wrong)
 Done Replaced with one from the British Film Institute, which should suffice. --TheSandDoctor Talk 01:39, 4 January 2019 (UTC)[reply]

There's a lot of stuff here, but most of the points listed above are minor. So I will not outright fail this nomination, but I would like to see progress during the next week or too.--12george1 (talk) 22:41, 3 January 2019 (UTC)[reply]

@12george1: I feel like I left this article in better shape when I actually nominated it almost a year ago. Truth betold, I had forgotten about this nomination. I shall work on the above and see what I can get done this week. When I nominated it I had a lot more time and this review started right at the end of my Christmas holidays (obviously not your fault, just not the most optimal timing ). --TheSandDoctor Talk 23:43, 3 January 2019 (UTC)[reply]
@12george1: What are your thoughts on the above 12george1? --TheSandDoctor Talk 00:08, 25 April 2019 (UTC)[reply]
I am going to pass this article now. Sorry for the long delays.--12george1 (talk) 00:38, 25 April 2019 (UTC)[reply]
  • ​​​​Something I was surprised didn't come up here is the first-level "21st century" section. It doesn't fit with the topics of the other sections and other than the fact that the events within occurred in the 21st century, they have nothing in common. Some are personal life/image items, some are career activities and some are honours/legacy. Even the "Tributes for other artists" subsection deals mostly with other topics. I'm mentioning this here because a) I can't think of another title for the section that would encompass its contents* and b) I didn't want to rip apart a big GA section without input from others. *(I thought of "Later career" but that doesn't quite fit either.) Any input would be appreciated. —  AjaxSmack  03:35, 30 August 2023 (UTC)[reply]
    @AjaxSmack: I haven't really touched this one significantly in a number of years but we can certainly spin off a sandbox or subpage or something and trial out ideas. Happy to take part. Getting it up to WP:FA is a longer term goal of mine. TheSandDoctor Talk 04:29, 30 August 2023 (UTC)[reply]
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