Talk:Kiribati at the 2012 Summer Olympics/GA1

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Reviewer: Courcelles (talk · contribs) 21:23, 30 June 2018 (UTC)[reply]

"Three athletes from Kiribati were selected to compete in athletics and weightlifting." Needs a re-write to distinguish two athletics competitors and one weightlifter, not three of each or some other possible readings.
- Done Kees08 (Talk)
"Kiribati's first Games was in 2004.[2] Kiribati had interest in Olympic participation in the 1980s, and the country later formed their National Olympic Committee (NOC) in 2002, which was recognized by the International Olympic Committee (IOC) in 2003.[3]:311" Like last time, these sentences work better in reverse order. Also might be worth mentioning when Kiribati gained its independence for context.
- Done Kees08 (Talk)
Maybe limit the athletics key to only the items you're actually using.
- I was thinking about this earlier this week; I was not sure what to do since all of the articles are they way it was. I agree though; we should get rid of the items not used in the tables. Removed. Kees08 (Talk)
See WP:PSEUDOHEAD for guidance about the ";Men" and such.
- Fixed by someone else Kees08 (Talk)
Not sure "94 kg group." that group is the right word. Perhaps "Men's under 94 kg event"?
- Tried to clarify a bit; in wrestling we would say "I wrestled in the 103 lb weight class" and I am not sure the exact equivalent for weightlifting. Tried to follow the example from another article w/ new wording. Kees08 (Talk)
Mention opening and closing flagbearers in the body somewhere, and source them.
- Done Kees08 (Talk)

Otherwise this is a good piece of work. Courcelles (talk) 21:31, 30 June 2018 (UTC)[reply]