Talk:Livin' la Vida Loca/GA1

GA Review

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Reviewer: Some Dude From North Carolina (talk · contribs) 02:11, 5 July 2021 (UTC)

Hey, I'm going to be reviewing this article. Expect comments by the end of the week. Some Dude From North Carolina (talk) 02:11, 5 July 2021 (UTC)

Comments

• The non-free use rationales are all in great shape.
• Add WP:ALT text and WP:UPRIGHT to every image.
• "and is ranked [...] and is ranked" - kinda repetitive
• Remove MOS:CONTRACTIONS (isn't, wasn't, etc.).
• In the lead, remove the second link to Billboard (magazine).
• Add a serial comma after Best Male Pop Vocal Performance (both times).
• "awards shows" → "award shows"
• Add a comma after "first English album".
• "rock–inspired" → "rock-inspired" (WP:DASH)
• Add a comma after "instead".
• Wiklink bona fide.
• Add a hyphen between "second best".
• "respective nomination" → "a respective nomination"
• Add a serial comma after "Pop Airplay".
• Add a comma after "however".
• Add a MOS:GEOCOMMA after Los Angeles, California.
• Add a MOS:DATECOMMA after March 25, 1999.
• "similar the lyrics" → "similar to the lyrics"
• Remove the comma after "they kiss".
• "gave it a performance" → "performed" (less wordy)
• Add serial commas after "55th", "2007, 2014", and Marc Anthony.
• Add a comma after "another article".
• Most sources are archived.
• Sort categories in alphabetical order.
• That's it from me. Great work!

@Some Dude From North Carolina: Thank you so much for your comments, I followed all of them and fixed the issues you mentioned. آرمین هویدایی (talk) 16:06, 6 July 2021 (UTC)

Progress

GA review (see here for what the criteria are, and here for what they are not)
It is reasonably well written. a (prose, spelling, and grammar): b (MoS for lead, layout, word choice, fiction, and lists): It is factually accurate and verifiable. a (references): b (citations to reliable sources): c (OR): d (copyvio and plagiarism): It is broad in its coverage. a (major aspects): b (focused): It follows the neutral point of view policy. Fair representation without bias: It is stable. No edit wars, etc.: It is illustrated by images, where possible and appropriate. a (images are tagged and non-free images have fair use rationales): b (appropriate use with suitable captions):
Overall: Pass/Fail:
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