Talk:Log line
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Hook
[edit]Is there an additional example that could be included that emplys the emotional "hook" as described? — Preceding unsigned comment added by 75.92.244.192 (talk) 02:54, 5 April 2014 (UTC)
Introduction
[edit]The first paragraph contains two contradictory sentences back to back: ""[A logline is for] defining the theme of the project...and suggest[ing] a bigger meaning."[4] "A logline is [...] not a statement of theme but rather a premise."[5]"". Should caveats be provided for both sentences (e.g., explanations of who said the quotes), or should one be deleted?