Talk:Mistakes (Tove Styrke song)

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GA Review

This review is transcluded from Talk:Mistakes (Tove Styrke song)/GA1. The edit link for this section can be used to add comments to the review.

Reviewer: K. Peake (talk · contribs) 11:00, 30 January 2023 (UTC)[reply]

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Criteria: 1a. prose () 1b. MoS () 2a. ref layout () 2b. cites WP:RS () 2c. no WP:OR () 2d. no WP:CV ()

3a. broadness () 3b. focus () 4. neutral () 5. stable () 6a. free or tagged images () 6b. pics relevant ()

Note: this represents where the article stands relative to the Good Article criteria. Criteria marked are unassessed

I will go through this now! --K. Peake 11:00, 30 January 2023 (UTC)[reply]

Infobox and lead

Infobox looks good!
Add a comma after third studio album
"The song was released as" → "It was released as" and swap this with the inspiration sentence
""Mistakes" received critical acclaim, with music critics commending its" → ""Mistakes" received acclaim from music critics, who commended its"
Mention that the certification was in Sweden
"the idea of perfection. The video includes references to the 1999 film Runaway Bride" → "the idea of perfection and references to the 1999 film Runaway Bride are included"
Mention the awards ceremony performance at the end of the lead

Background and release

"wrote "Mistakes" with" → "co-wrote "Mistakes" with"
"the song, and the structure of the chorus was altered several times before" → "the song and the structure of the chorus was altered several times, before" with the pipe
""Finding those special" → ""And finding those special" per the source
"designed the artwork for the "Mistakes" single," → "designed the artwork for "Mistakes","
Remove "of the cover" from the end of the sentence, however the some releases are not sourced
Pipe VAX to VAX (band) per MOS:LINK2SECT

Composition and lyrics

Audio sample looks good!
""Mistakes" is a" → "Musically, "Mistakes" is a"
"as she sings "You make me" → "as she sings "you make me"
"complements the lyric" → "complements the line"
"into the hook "You" → "into the hook "you"

Reception

"received widespread praise from music critic." → "was met with widespread praise from music critics."
Idolator should not be italicised
"Day commented, "It's" → "Day commented that "it's"
"bursts from Styrke."" → "bursts from Styrke"." per MOS:QUOTE
"called it "fantastic"," → "called the song "fantastic",
"streams in the country." → "streams in Sweden."

Music video

Img looks good!
"Joanna Nordahl directed the accompanying music video for" → "Joanna Nordahl directed the music video for"
"to her, "It was fun to" → "to her and "it was fun to"
"stating that "We ended up" → "stating that they "ended up"
"of the 'perfect woman'."" → "of the 'perfect woman'"." per MOS:QUOTE
"in late-August 2017 on" → "in late August 2017 on"
Remove the comma after Visby Ladies
"that "It's this romantic theme" → "that "it's this romantic theme"
"on 4 October 2017 on Styrke's" → "on 4 October 2017, via Styrke's"
"She continues to run" → "Styrke continues to run"
The quote she "told The Fader" is not sourced

Live performances

"She also included" → "Styrke also included"

Track listing

Good

Credits and personnel

Use {{spaced ndash}} so there is the right space between credits and personnel

Charts

Good

Certifications

Good

Release history

Format → Format(s)
The citations do not back up various releases

References

Copyvio score looks too high at 43.5%; cut down the level of direct quoting from The Fader and Variance to resolve this
Cite BroadwayWorld as publisher instead on refs 11 and 39
Cite Idolator as publisher instead on ref 19

External links

Good

Final comments and verdict

On hold until all of the issues are fixed; that met my target time! --K. Peake 13:36, 30 January 2023 (UTC)[reply]

@Kyle Peake: I think I've addressed all the issues now. Thanks for the review :) Pancake (talk) 20:34, 31 January 2023 (UTC)[reply]

✓ Pass now, good job on this and kudos for a quick response! --K. Peake 07:09, 1 February 2023 (UTC)[reply]