Talk:Palo Alto station/GA1
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Reviewer: Truflip99 (talk · contribs) 21:06, 7 April 2020 (UTC)
I will be doing this review. --Truflip99 (talk) 21:06, 7 April 2020 (UTC)
- I would take off one image from the Streamline section, that way you can remove the clearleft TPs. Too many photos for the length of the article.
Done
The first Palo Alto station was opened in 1890 to serve the then-new Stanford University.
-- then-new sounds odd, "then-newly established"Done
Palo Alto station was opened in 1890 to serve the new Stanford University.
-- "newly established" here as wellDone
it was enclosed in 1893 as a waiting room.
-- "and became a waiting room" sounds betterDone (with slightly different wording)
(previously used for the Los Gatos station, and later used as the Los Altos station)
-- I'd clarify what this is referring toDone
It was never locally popular, and calls came for its replacement as early as the 1920s.
-- the station itself or the design?Done
it consists two buildings connected
-- "consists of", I thinkDone
one north of the station building, and a pair flanking University Avenue
-- comma not neededDone
SP Peninsula Commute local service (renamed Caltrain in 1985) continued to stop.
-- ... "here/at Palo Alto."Done
It was closed on October 27, 2004
-- comma after dateDone
The bicycle station reopened on February 27, 2007
-- comma againDone
from 2008 to 2009
-- upper caseDone
Caltrain constructed the $35 million Palo Alto Stations Improvement Project at Palo Alto and California Avenue stations.
-- the Palo Alto...Done
In 2013, the Santa Clara Valley Transportation Authority proposed to relocate
-- "proposed relocating"Done
lengthy tunnel under the downtown area.
-- lenthy --> longDone
Dumbarton Express, SamTrans, VTA, and some Marguerite buses stop in a bus plaza located northwest of the station building (adjacent to the southbound platform), with some Marguerite buses instead stopping south of the station building.
-- consider splittingDone
- ref 7: need access date as info subject to change
Done Added access dates for a couple sources.
All I got. Good stuff. --Truflip99 (talk) 22:56, 7 April 2020 (UTC)
- Thanks for the review! I believe I've addressed everything. Pi.1415926535 (talk) 23:49, 7 April 2020 (UTC)