Talk:The Dark Ocean

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Phrase "way out of line" seemed tonally off for this site

I removed the word "way" from the sentence "... his amorous advances get out of line ..." from the plot summary section. Could anyone please tell me if I was right to do this? Thylacine24 (talk) 13:56, 19 September 2022 (UTC)[reply]

I understand that Jack's "straight" fiction was usually credited to John Holbrook Vance; is that true of this one? —Tamfang (talk) 03:47, 16 November 2022 (UTC)[reply]