Jump to content

英文维基 | 中文维基 | 日文维基 | 草榴社区

Talk:Togo at the 2016 Summer Paralympics/GA1

Page contents not supported in other languages.
From Wikipedia, the free encyclopedia

GA Review

[edit]
GA toolbox
Reviewing

Article (edit | visual edit | history) · Article talk (edit | history) · Watch

Reviewer: Courcelles (talk · contribs) 20:50, 15 April 2018 (UTC)[reply]


  • "Togo first competed at the 1972 Games in" Olympic should be specified here.
  • "They participated on nine occasions prior to the 2016 Summer Paralympics, where they made their Summer Paralympics debut in Rio de Janeiro, Brazil, with the exception of the 1976 Summer Olympics in Montreal and the 1980 Summer Games in the Soviet Union,[1] the former because of a boycott relating to the New Zealand national rugby union team touring South Africa earlier in 1976, and the latter because the country joined the United States-led boycott over the 1979 invasion of Afghanistan during the Soviet–Afghan War." Run-on sentence, consider a total re-write into two distinct sentences, one on their Olympic history, and one on their Paralympic.
  • Like I've said before, was there a flagbearer for the closing?

Otherwise, looks good. Courcelles (talk) 22:55, 15 April 2018 (UTC)[reply]