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Talk:Tornado outbreak of April 26–28, 2024

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Lede[edit]

One may notice several possible flaws in the lede, namely these sentences:

On April 26, a tornado in Lancaster County, Nebraska, injured three people, which touched down in the northeastern outskirts of Lincoln, Nebraska - Why is this tornado lede-worthy?

At least twenty eight tornadoes were confirmed, with ten in Iowa and one each in Nebraska and Texas - Perhaps this should be updated or removed entirely?

At least six fatalities were attributed to the tornadoes, with more than 156 people injured - This is more or less repeated in the third paragraph.

Maybe the lede could be modified to include information about the Marietta tornado and the deaths that occurred at Sulphur and Minden? Idk.

Now, I would fix it myself, but I am hesitant to move forward without other editors' input due to my lack of experience in writing storm articles. AllTheUsernamesAreInUse (talk) 03:20, 26 May 2024 (UTC)[reply]