Talk:Woollen Gymnasium/GA1

GA Review

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Reviewer: Hog Farm (talk · contribs) 22:29, 14 May 2020 (UTC)[reply]

1. Prose ✓ Pass

2. Verifiability ✓ Pass

3. Depth of Coverage ✓ Pass

4. Neutral ✓ Pass

5. Stable ✓ Pass

6. Illustrations ✓ Pass

7. Miscellaneous ✓ Pass

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This is really nitpicky, so this is optional, but for stuff like "twenty–six seasons", MOS:HYPHEN would suggest a hyphen, not an endash. MOS:DASH isn't really a GA-thing, so I'm not going to require dash fixes, except for a few special cases involving reference formatting.
"fund-raise" is one word usually, with no hyphen
Link fencing
"elected to build (the Tin Can) in 1923" - Are the paranthesis really necessary?
Go ahead and link President Roosevelt, since there were two of them, and non-American readers may not know the chronology enough to know which one is referred to. You can then remove the link to FDR in the next section
For the dimensions, can the {{convert}} template be added with meters?
"The main gym floor will gave room for two varsity basketball courts" - Remove "will"
Link limestone
"School president Frank Porter Graham" - I'm not sure that School should be capitalized in this usage.
"As of the conclusion of the 2019–20, Woollen" - I think you're missing the word season in here.
Link Habitat for Humanity

2.

Create a further reading section and move Powell there, he's not used as a ref.
In the short refs, you have a Wade 1962, but in the long refs, there's a Wade 1961 but not Wade 1962. Which date is correct?

3.

In the infobox, you state that is was renovated in 2004 and 2010, but the 2010 renovation isn't mentioned in the article.

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Addressed everything but the 2010 renovation. Disc Wheel (T + C) 03:07, 16 May 2020 (UTC)[reply]

@Hog Farm: Added as much info as I could find on the 2010 (actually 2009-12) renovation. Disc Wheel (T + C) 11:53, 16 May 2020 (UTC)[reply]