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Great start on this article. I've got a couple questions and some comments.

  • While the photo of Bukeni Tete Waruzi was taken in Uganda, do we know that he is from there? The image file page says he works on child soldier issues in Congo (DRC).
  • I think you got the 'generally youth can be defined as the period of age between 15 and 24 years old' from the UNICEF data, but I would argue that youth is often inclusive of younger people and sometimes excludes those 18 and over. Perhaps if it was worded 'UNICEF defines young people as those between...'
  • Rather than using the Urban Youth Workers Institute as a reference, it would be better to link directly to the source documents (it looks as if they got their numbers from UNESCO, Freedom House, and the CIA World Factbook).
  • The final sentence in the 'Health' section needs a reference.
  • References should not be bare urls. The reflinks tool can be used to fill these in.

That's all I've got for now. Thank you for starting this article. Gobōnobō + c 22:39, 16 May 2013 (UTC)[reply]

User:Gobonobo - thanks for this work on the article. We will pick up in the fall, as Uganda is a popular country to learn about on Drake's campus due to our popular travel study trip.Prof.Vandegrift (talk) 22:32, 21 May 2013 (UTC)[reply]

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This is a very excellent and rich article. I applaud the Wikipedians who have made this possible. Some of the references are dynamic and are bound to change from time to time. Thank you for making up time to always update it. User:Scarlson0921 User:Alifazal User:Gobonobo Danidamiobi (talk) 18:16, 20 March 2018 (UTC)[reply]