Template:Did you know nominations/Added sugar
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The result was: promoted by Allen3 talk 16:45, 23 April 2013 (UTC).
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Added sugar
[edit]- ... that the most common sources of added sugar consumption are sweetened beverages?
- Reviewed: Chippewa Nature Center
Created by Piotrus (talk). Self nominated at 07:12, 4 April 2013 (UTC).
Although the hook said something slightly different from the article, although both version are backed up by the source. I'll change the article to say the same thing as the hook. Everything else looks good.--ragesoss (talk) 03:03, 6 April 2013 (UTC)
- Is this just in the US or world-wide? The article doesn't make it clear. PanydThe muffin is not subtle 21:19, 8 April 2013 (UTC)
- Which part? The article clarifies it uses US stat for use of added sugar (I couldn't find any others), but the concept of added sugar is of course universal. --Piotr Konieczny aka Prokonsul Piotrus| reply here 02:38, 9 April 2013 (UTC)
- The two sentences proceeding the claim are US-centric, and then the sentence after the claim is also US-centric. Makes it confusing. Presuming that The most common types of foods containing added sugars are sweetened beverages such as most sodas - is what we're talking about. PanydThe muffin is not subtle 15:01, 9 April 2013 (UTC)
- I see. I have now added a subsection that clearly separates the US-centric data abut consumption from the more generic rest of the article. Is it satisfactory now? --Piotr Konieczny aka Prokonsul Piotrus| reply here 04:16, 10 April 2013 (UTC)
- The two sentences proceeding the claim are US-centric, and then the sentence after the claim is also US-centric. Makes it confusing. Presuming that The most common types of foods containing added sugars are sweetened beverages such as most sodas - is what we're talking about. PanydThe muffin is not subtle 15:01, 9 April 2013 (UTC)
- Which part? The article clarifies it uses US stat for use of added sugar (I couldn't find any others), but the concept of added sugar is of course universal. --Piotr Konieczny aka Prokonsul Piotrus| reply here 02:38, 9 April 2013 (UTC)
- Hey! Could someone else review this? Should be fine. PanydThe muffin is not subtle 21:32, 17 April 2013 (UTC)
