Template:Did you know nominations/Corrado Miraglia
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The result was: promoted by Allen3 talk 13:21, 27 February 2015 (UTC)
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Corrado Miraglia
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... that tenor Corrado Miraglia (pictured), who had created a role in Verdi's Nabucco at La Scala, retired from the stage and became a soloist at the cathedral?
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Created by Voceditenore (talk). Nominated by Gerda Arendt (talk) at 22:55, 28 January 2015 (UTC).
- Perhaps a better and and clearer wording of the hook would be:
- ALT1: ... that Corrado Miraglia (pictured), who created the role of Ismaele in Verdi's opera Nabucco, became a soloist at the Milan Cathedral when he retired from the stage?
- Voceditenore (talk) 12:59, 30 January 2015 (UTC)
New enough, long enough, neutrally written, well sourced. As most refs are offline or foreign-language, unable to check for close paraphrasing, but the writing seems original enough to be avoiding copying the sources. Offline and foreign-language hook refs AGF and cited inline. Image is pd. QPQ done. I just have one question about the use of the word "sank" in the first paragraph under Roles created. Do you mean "disappeared from the music scene"? Yoninah (talk) 20:04, 24 February 2015 (UTC)
- Hi Yoninah. Yes, I did mean that. I was being a little too colloquial there. I've changed it per your suggestion. Best Voceditenore (talk) 06:37, 25 February 2015 (UTC)
