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The result was: promoted by Yoninah (talk) 20:17, 24 September 2019 (UTC)

Embioptera

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... that the silk made by webspinners is produced from glands on their front legs?
- ALT1:... that many species of webspinner offer maternal care to their eggs, guarding them from egg parasitoids and driving away other webspinners?

Reviewed: KOET (Utah)

Improved to Good Article status by Chiswick Chap (talk) and Cwmhiraeth (talk). Nominated by Cwmhiraeth (talk) at 10:03, 17 September 2019 (UTC).

General: Article is new enough and long enough
New enough: Long enough:

Policy: Article is sourced, neutral, and free of copyright problems
Adequate sourcing: Neutral: Free of copyright violations, plagiarism, and close paraphrasing:

Hook: Hook has been verified by provided inline citation
Cited: Interesting:

QPQ: Done.

Overall: Qualifies as a new GA. Good to go. Ergo Sum 04:30, 18 September 2019 (UTC)

Hi, I came by to promote this, but I'm having difficulty locating the hook fact in the sources. Could you provide page numbers for ALT0 and ALT1 please? Yoninah (talk) 22:39, 21 September 2019 (UTC)

I'm not sure what you mean about page numbers. I have added an extra citation for the maternal care, but the silk glands in the legs is mentioned in several places, some with citations. Cwmhiraeth (talk) 05:09, 22 September 2019 (UTC)

@Cwmhiraeth: there is only one citation for the ALT0 hook fact. It tells me the fact is somewhere on pages 15-27. Could you point me to the exact page number for this fact? Thanks, Yoninah (talk) 22:09, 23 September 2019 (UTC)

@Yoninah: I'm not sure which sentence you were looking at, but I have rearranged the third paragraph of the "Description" section, so the fact is well-cited there. Cwmhiraeth (talk) 18:53, 24 September 2019 (UTC)

Thank you. I think I was getting stuck on the first paragraph under "Name and etymology" and not scrolling down to see more description and sourcing. Restoring tick per Ergo Sum's review. Yoninah (talk) 20:16, 24 September 2019 (UTC)