Template:Did you know nominations/Hotel Milan

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The result was: promoted by Cwmhiraeth (talk) 06:08, 18 June 2020 (UTC)

Hotel Milan

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• ... that the 2018 film Hotel Milan is based on the "anti-Romeo squads" formed in the Indian state of Uttar Pradesh? Source: "I don't expect any protests against film: 'Hotel Milan' director". Outlook. Press Trust of India. 21 August 2018. Retrieved 13 April 2020.
  • ALT1:... that following the objection of Central Board of Film Certification, a footage showing Yogi Adityanath was removed from the 2018 film Hotel Milan? Source: Varma, Lipika (13 November 2018). "Censor axe on Hotel Milan". The Asian Age. Retrieved 13 April 2020.

• Reviewed: Macrolibramiento Palmillas-Apaseo el Grande

5x expanded by Skr15081997 (talk). Self-nominated at 18:39, 14 April 2020 (UTC).

• New enough, long enough. QPQ done and image properly licensed. Not seeing anything with the article content, other than the synopsis section is unsourced. I also don't like ALT1 as I don't consider "Censor Board" to be neutral.--Launchballer 21:48, 16 May 2020 (UTC)

• The prose could also use a copyedit for English grammar. Yoninah (talk) 22:04, 16 May 2020 (UTC)

• Yoninah, I have copyedited the article; User:Launchballer, ALT1 has been tweaked for neutral wording. --Skr15081997 (talk) 11:44, 6 June 2020 (UTC)

I've gone directly to the source and found that it actually says that the scenes were cut to receive an A-rating, so I've produced my own hook to that effect. Synopsis still unsourced.

ALT2: ... that the 2018 film Hotel Milan had to have news footage involving Yogi Adityanath cut in order to receive an A-rating from the Central Board of Film Certification?--Launchballer 12:28, 6 June 2020 (UTC)

User:Launchballer, I'm fine with ALT2. --Skr15081997 (talk) 12:46, 6 June 2020 (UTC)

• @Skr15081997: Plot and synopsis sections do not need to be sourced. ALT2 is slightly inaccurate, as the article says the problem was with the trailer and not the film; the article also says nothing about an A-rating. I've struck ALT1 for including a name that most readers will never have heard of. ALT0 is so-so. Yoninah (talk) 19:10, 6 June 2020 (UTC)

I have a policy of basing my ALTs on what the sources say rather than the articles, which means this article is inaccurate.--Launchballer 19:29, 6 June 2020 (UTC)

• @Launchballer: well, if you want to help this nomination along, you could have updated the article according to the source and then proposed the alt hook. Yoninah (talk) 19:30, 6 June 2020 (UTC)

• OK, I'll finish up this nomination. I think ALT0 is going to have greater appeal to an international audience, so let's run with that. ALT0 hook ref verified and cited inline. Rest of review per Launchballer. ALT0 good to go. Yoninah (talk) 20:18, 15 June 2020 (UTC)