Template:Did you know nominations/Ibaqa Beki

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The result was: promoted by Yoninah (talk) 16:02, 1 November 2020 (UTC)

Ibaqa Beki

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... that Ibaqa Beki was briefly married to Genghis Khan, who abruptly gave her to one of his generals, possibly as a reward to that general for killing her father?

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Created by 3family6 (talk). Self-nominated at 01:27, 27 October 2020 (UTC).

New enough, long enough, adequately referenced, no close paraphrasing seen. However, I don't see any verification for the sentence According to The Secret History of the Mongols, Genghis Khan gave Ibaqa to Jürchedei as a reward for his service in defeating Ong Khan in 1203 and, later, Jakha Gambhu. in the source given (footnote 4). And if you use the word abruptly in the hook, it must also be mentioned and cited in the article. QPQ done. Yoninah (talk) 20:54, 27 October 2020 (UTC)

Corrected the one statement (it was specifically Nilga Senggum, an ally of Ong Khan, who was killed in 1203), and I included "abruptly", which is verbatim the adjective used by Broadbridge, into the article.--3family6 (Talk to me | See what I have done) 00:10, 28 October 2020 (UTC)

Thank you. Hook ref verified and cited inline. Good to go. Yoninah (talk) 17:01, 28 October 2020 (UTC)