Template:Did you know nominations/Mammy's Cupboard

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The result was: promoted by Crisco 1492 (talk) 00:20, 15 September 2011 (UTC)

Mammy's Cupboard

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... that the restaurant Mammy's Cupboard, located near Natchez, Mississippi, was built to resemble a mammy archetype and has been said to resemble Aunt Jemima?

Reviewed: Louise Casey

Created/expanded by SL93 (talk). Self nom at 18:01, 11 September 2011 (UTC)

Hook review
Format	Citation	Neutrality	Interest
needs some tweaking	Marrante (talk)	Marrante (talk)	like fingernails on a chalkboard - no idea if that's good or bad Marrante (talk)

Article review
Length	Newness	Adequate citations	Formatted citations	Reliable sources	Neutrality	Plagiarism
Marrante (talk)	Marrante (talk)	Marrante (talk)	Marrante (talk)	Marrante (talk)	Marrante (talk)	Marrante (talk)

The hook needs to explain how it is that a restaurant can look like a person. Otherwise, it's okay. Marrante (talk) 19:48, 12 September 2011 (UTC)
- I reworded the hook. I do not know what you mean in the Interest section. SL93 (talk) 19:50, 12 September 2011 (UTC)

You've got a bit many wikilinks in your hook – it pulls hits from your article! I recommend this alt:
ALT1: ... that the Mississippi restaurant Mammy's Cupboard, built in the shape of a woman, has been said to resemble Aunt Jemima?

That's better. I got a bit too long winded. SL93 (talk) 20:07, 12 September 2011 (UTC)

Good to go, using ALT1 hook. Marrante (talk) 20:16, 12 September 2011 (UTC)