Template:Did you know nominations/Marion Underwood
- The following is an archived discussion of the DYK nomination of the article below. Please do not modify this page. Subsequent comments should be made on the appropriate discussion page (such as this nomination's talk page, the article's talk page or Wikipedia talk:Did you know), unless there is consensus to re-open the discussion at this page. No further edits should be made to this page.
The result was: promoted by Cwmhiraeth (talk) 05:51, 12 June 2019 (UTC)
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Marion Underwood
[edit]... that Marion Underwood found that teens send an average of 1321 texts per month?Source: Bristol, T. (August 2, 2011). Texting changes the way kids communicate. Journal Review. Retrieved from http://www.journalreview.com/news/article_0a94c57a-bca5-11e0-97f3-001cc4c002e0.html on December 13, 2018.ALT1:... that Marion Underwood found that teens' texts are mostly socially supportive and "building each other up"? Source: Bristol, T. (August 2, 2011). Texting changes the way kids communicate. Journal Review. Retrieved from http://www.journalreview.com/news/article_0a94c57a-bca5-11e0-97f3-001cc4c002e0.html on December 13, 2018.- ALT2:... that developmental researcher Marion Underwood found that teens send an average of 1321 texts per month?Source: Bristol, T. (August 2, 2011). Texting changes the way kids communicate. Journal Review. Retrieved from http://www.journalreview.com/news/article_0a94c57a-bca5-11e0-97f3-001cc4c002e0.html on December 13, 2018.
ALT3:... that Marion Underwood, dean of Purdue University's College of Health & Human Services found that teens send an average of 1321 texts per month?Source: Bristol, T. (August 2, 2011). Texting changes the way kids communicate. Journal Review. Retrieved from http://www.journalreview.com/news/article_0a94c57a-bca5-11e0-97f3-001cc4c002e0.html on December 13, 2018.
Created by QuakerSquirrel (talk). Self-nominated at 18:33, 14 May 2019 (UTC).
- I have reviewed Template:Did you know nominations/Maria Hueber. QuakerSquirrel (talk) 19:10, 16 May 2019 (UTC)
- Review - Article long enough, moved from userspace, rather than new article. No copyvio found. Hooks require more context. At a glance, who is Marion Underwood? ALT1 doesn't really seem very interesting to me. First hook is best, but needs infomation on who Marion is, that she's a researcher. Otherwise ok. QPQ done.
Best Wishes, Lee Vilenski (talk • contribs) 13:18, 10 June 2019 (UTC)
- @Lee Vilenski: I added a couple of possibilities for who she is in Alt 2 & 3 hooks. Do you have a preference? Thanks for reviewing! QuakerSquirrel (talk) 20:50, 11 June 2019 (UTC)
- ALT2 is by far the best.
Best Wishes, Lee Vilenski (talk • contribs) 20:55, 11 June 2019 (UTC)
- @Lee Vilenski: I'm pretty new at this -- I've crossed out the hooks not to use. Do I need to do anything else to move it along or do others/bots take care of that now that you've given it a check? QuakerSquirrel (talk) 20:59, 11 June 2019 (UTC)
- QuakerSquirrel - That's it! The tick template is read by the bot, and moved to the correct queue, and eventually (takes a while), an admin will add it to the prep queue, and eventually the main page. Best Wishes, Lee Vilenski (talk • contribs) 21:09, 11 June 2019 (UTC)
- ALT2 is by far the best.
- Review - Article long enough, moved from userspace, rather than new article. No copyvio found. Hooks require more context. At a glance, who is Marion Underwood? ALT1 doesn't really seem very interesting to me. First hook is best, but needs infomation on who Marion is, that she's a researcher. Otherwise ok. QPQ done.
