Template:Did you know nominations/Parsi Lying-in Hospital

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The result was: promoted by Vincent^LUFan (talk) (Kenton!) 05:49, 26 December 2018 (UTC)

Parsi Lying-in Hospital

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• ... that the Parsi Lying-in Hospital was one of the first maternity hospitals in Bombay?
  • ALT1:... that among the babies born at the Parsi Lying-in Hospital was the Indian politician Feroze Gandhi?

• Reviewed: Sitaris muralis
• Comment: 5 x expanded from 16 Nov. One day late, hope that's OK. No free image found.

5x expanded by Philafrenzy (talk), Whispyhistory (talk), and Rsrikanth05 (talk). Nominated by Philafrenzy (talk) at 00:06, 24 November 2018 (UTC).

• @Philafrenzy, Whispyhistory, and Rsrikanth05: I can accept this being a day late, but the article needs a copyedit before this is approved. There are missing words and excessive commas here which make the article a little hard to read. Narutolovehinata5 ^tccsdnew 11:30, 26 November 2018 (UTC)

I did some copyediting. Philafrenzy (talk) 13:43, 26 November 2018 (UTC)

Some more suggestions: in "The dean of Grant Medical College, physician and obstetrician Temulji Nariman", it might be a good idea to switch the two phrases since that wording seems awkward. And I think it might also be a good idea to link to Indian rupee at the first mention in the article. Narutolovehinata5 ^tccsdnew 23:52, 26 November 2018 (UTC)

Done. Philafrenzy (talk) 00:20, 27 November 2018 (UTC)

General: Article is new enough and long enough
New enough: Long enough:

Policy: Article is sourced, neutral, and free of copyright problems
Adequate sourcing: Neutral: Free of copyright violations, plagiarism, and close paraphrasing:

Hook eligibility:

• Cited:
• Interesting:
• Other problems:

QPQ: Done.

Overall: I'm assuming good faith for the source for the hook fact as I'm unable to access it. Narutolovehinata5 ^tccsdnew 03:40, 28 November 2018 (UTC)

• Could you suggest something more hooky? Yoninah (talk) 22:56, 17 December 2018 (UTC)

Added alt. Philafrenzy (talk) 23:19, 17 December 2018 (UTC)

• ALT2: ... that women stayed for more than a month at the Parsi Lying-in Hospital in Bombay? Yoninah (talk) 23:39, 17 December 2018 (UTC)

Sorry, I am not seeing the hookyness of that one. Philafrenzy (talk) 23:55, 17 December 2018 (UTC)

• No problem. Your ALT1 is good; hook ref verified and cited inline. Rest of review per Narutolovehinata5. ALT1 good to go. Yoninah (talk) 00:07, 18 December 2018 (UTC)