Template:Did you know nominations/Strike Zone

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The result was: promoted by Hawkeye7 (talk) 11:17, 20 October 2014 (UTC)

Strike Zone

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• ... that author Peter David wrote in the Star Trek: The Next Generation novel Strike Zone that Commander Riker grew his beard to annoy Captain Picard?

• Reviewed: Cabot's tragopan

5x expanded by Miyagawa (talk). Self nominated at 22:08, 7 September 2014 (UTC).

• How about ALT1: ... that in the Star Trek: The Next Generation novel Strike Zone, author Peter David wrote that Commander Riker grew his beard to annoy Captain Picard? G S Palmer (talk • contribs) 02:08, 11 October 2014 (UTC)
  • New enough (x5 expanded on 7 September 2014), long enough (3,895 characters), fully referenced, but... if the subject is a work of fiction or a fictional character, the hook must involve the real world in some way. New hook needed. Hawkeye7 (talk) 02:56, 17 October 2014 (UTC)
    • How about

ALT2: ... that in order to write the novel Strike Zone, author Peter David spoke with actress Marina Sirtis to gain an insight into her character in Star Trek: The Next Generation? Miyagawa (talk) 17:35, 17 October 2014 (UTC)

• This article is new enough and long enough. The ALT2 hook is acceptable and has inline citations, and I have struck the other hook. No policy issues detected and QPQ has been done. Cwmhiraeth (talk) 06:26, 19 October 2014 (UTC)