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Brittany's Peer Review

In the "Health" section there is a mistake on the last sentence. Change "mothers" to "mother" to allow the sentence to read more smoothly. Other than that, good read. The facts and citations look great. Sentences flow well. And transitioning from section to section is also well done. The topic is interesting and I personally did not know that child marriage or the effects and contributing factors of it.

Maureen's Peer Review

Erin --

This is a great topic! I would be interested in how Child Marriages in Niger compare to the average age of marriage in other African states. Are the rates higher or comparable? Also, was there any research pertaining to why the marriage rate in Niger is so young? Additionally, give what we learned about the Niger Delta a few weeks ago, are the child marriages considered human right's abuses and have there been any notable cases about it that you could add.

Overall, this is a really great topic and what you have already is great! I saw Brittany's review and didn't want to duplicate comments so I didn't look for grammatical errors. I can't wait to read the final product. — Preceding unsigned comment added by MSimmo2019 (talk • contribs) 02:58, 7 April 2019 (UTC)