User talk:Headshrinker90

May 2020

Hello, I'm Materialscientist. I noticed that in this edit to Target Australia, you removed content without adequately explaining why. In the future, it would be helpful to others if you described your changes to Wikipedia with an edit summary. If this was a mistake, don't worry, the removed content has been restored. If you think I made a mistake, or if you have any questions, you can leave me a message on my talk page. Thank you. Materialscientist (talk) 09:47, 18 May 2020 (UTC)[reply]

August 2020

Welcome to Wikipedia. Although everyone is welcome to contribute to Wikipedia, at least one of your recent edits, such as the one you made to Marks & Spencer, appears to have been inappropriate, and has been reverted. Your edit included at least one misplaced external link. If you intended them to be references, please read Referencing for beginners. Thank you. David Biddulph (talk) 13:10, 7 August 2020 (UTC)[reply]

Please do not add promotional material to Wikipedia, as you did to Marks & Spencer. While objective prose about beliefs, organisations, people, products or services is acceptable, Wikipedia is not a vehicle for soapboxing, advertising or promotion. Phrases such as “better choice and better value”, “upgrading product quality and investing in price”, "the most competitively priced in recent history" are unacceptable. MichaelMaggs (talk) 08:48, 20 August 2020 (UTC)[reply]

Thanks MichaelMaggs. I'll re-submit a new version based on your feedback.