User talk:Jd34087n/Models of communication

Hello everyone. Thank you for your feedback on this Wiki article. I was doing most of my adjustments onto the original article, but then decided to do my editing onto my own Sandbox. With further analysis of the original article on "Models of Communication", the information seemed disjointed and lacked proper cohesion from one topic to another. What is viewed on my Sandbox is my suggestion on how the original article should flow with my personal research on linear communications. Thank you, Miles on your suggestion to the original article as it greatly helped guide me on my final draft.(User talk:jd3408n) — Preceding unsigned comment added by Jd34087n (talk • contribs) 03:27, 28 November 2022 (UTC)[reply]

Hi. I am trying to write my peer review but I can't find the sandbox with your edits. If you can get back to me where I can find your edits so I can do my peer review that would be awesome! Thank you!

Hi there, I saw there weren't any edits in the sandbox so I added a suggestion on what you maybe could add to the original article. I hope it helps in some way :) Milesmorales2001 (talk) 03:10, 24 October 2022 (UTC)[reply]