User talk:KrishtynH/sandbox

Your outline looks simple and efficient and well organized. It's nice to see that you have so many sources to refer too. The language that you use seems simple and easy to follow for a layperson. I think y'all make a really good use of the links to other Wikipedia articles, but I can see where you can include more (if they exist on those topics).

In the Bulgaria section, "NBU" is referenced as the place where anthropology became officially introduced, but I don't know what that is. Presumably a university. I think it would be better to write those names out (and possibly link them to their respective Wikipedia page). Additionally, in the beginning of the second paragraph on Bulgaria, it looks like you might have meant to say "One of" instead of "Once of". Also I think the wording can be slightly tweaked just to make it easier to follow. But overall it looks like y'all are off to a great start. Wajm (talk) 15:32, 14 November 2017 (UTC)[reply]

Thanks for the feedback and we will be sure to add more links to other Wikipedia articles. I'm glad what we have written is understandable. — Preceding unsigned comment added by Mrslizk (talk • contribs) 21:06, 16 November 2017 (UTC)[reply]