User talk:Shayanr5

Hi. Welcome to my talk page. --Shayanr5 (talk) 16:54, 28 September 2017 (UTC)

Critique of Nas article

Hi, I am new to Wikipedia and doing an assignment for class where we find errors in the encyclopedia. The first error I've identified is a violation of a neutrality Wikipedia:Neutral point of view. In the introduction section there is contestable assertion that states "" Nas is often named as one of the greatest hip-hop artists." Furthermore there is mentions of his ranking on all-time hip-hop artists lists, but there are no links to the mentioned lists, citations needed. The second error I've identified is Citations 63 & 66, which the links do not access the direct article being sourced, please correct. --Shayanr5 (talk) 18:51, 4 October 2017 (UTC)

Critique of Lil Uzi Vert article

Hi I am new to Wikipedia and doing an assignment for class where we find errors in the encyclopedia. The first error I've identified is the number of record sales recorded in the article for Lil Uzi Vert's second album, Luv Is Rage 2. The article states the album has sold 135,000 units, however currently it has sold over 200,000, update needed. The second error is in the discography section of his article. There are several of his projects that are omitted in the discography section that should be included. Furthermore, there is a lack of substantial information in many sections throughout the article, such as the sections on his musical style and influences. --Shayanr5 (talk) 18:51, 4 October 2017 (UTC)