Wikipedia:Featured list candidates/Pakistan national women's cricket team record by opponent/archive1
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The list was promoted by SchroCat 20:09, 11 November 2014 [1].
Pakistan national women's cricket team record by opponent (edit | talk | history | protect | delete | links | watch | logs | views)
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- Nominator(s): Khadar Khani (talk) 03:24, 25 September 2014 (UTC)[reply]
This list is based on similar list, South Africa national women's cricket team record by opponent. I have worked on the list a few month back and now I believe this is according to the FL criteria. Look forward to your comments and suggestions. Regards, --Khadar Khani (talk) 03:24, 25 September 2014 (UTC)[reply]
- Quick comment looks really light on prose to me. I'd love to see some more detail ahead of each table. I know the SA list was promoted 18 months ago, but I don't think it meets what I would expect from a featured list any more. More discussion over the games, the significant results etc.... The Rambling Man (talk) 19:43, 28 September 2014 (UTC)[reply]
- @The Rambling Man: I have expanded the lede a little. Please have a look. Regards, --Khadar Khani (talk) 00:37, 30 September 2014 (UTC)[reply]
- Support. Great list, especially after the lede was expanded, well-sourced. --Carioca (talk) 21:05, 5 October 2014 (UTC)[reply]
- Comment Looks really good - another job well done by Sahara4u. Just a minor comment - is "Pakistan Women" a proper noun? The photo caption uses this, but the tables say "Pakistan women". I'll have a more indepth look at the list later. Lugnuts Dick Laurent is dead 07:32, 8 October 2014 (UTC)[reply]
- Fixed. --Khadar Khani (talk) 12:19, 8 October 2014 (UTC)[reply]
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;Comments from NickGibson3900 Talk
I Like it! Very good article and my suggested are just a bit of nitpicking - NickGibson3900 Talk 07:23, 13 October 2014 (UTC)[reply]
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- Support - Good list, meets the criteria . Also, I am waiting for you at my nom - NickGibson3900 Talk 06:09, 15 October 2014 (UTC)[reply]
Resolved comments from —Vensatry (ping) 16:40, 8 November 2014 (UTC)[reply] |
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Comments from —Vensatry (ping)
The list needs a fair amount of copy-edit before it gets promoted. In its current state, it clearly doesn't meet criterion #1. —Vensatry (ping) 18:31, 13 October 2014 (UTC)[reply]
—Vensatry (ping) 18:41, 4 November 2014 (UTC)[reply]
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- Support - Greatly improved since my first visit. If you have time can you review this one? —Vensatry (ping) 16:40, 8 November 2014 (UTC)[reply]
- @Vensatry: thanks for the support! I'll review your list ASAP. FYI, List of Pakistan women Twenty20 International cricketers is once again at FLC! Regards, --Khadar Khani (talk) 17:56, 8 November 2014 (UTC)[reply]
- Closing note: This candidate has been promoted, but there may be a delay in bot processing of the close. Please see WP:FLC/ar, and leave the {{featured list candidates}} template in place on the talk page until the bot goes through. – SchroCat (talk) 20:00, 11 November 2014 (UTC)[reply]
- The above discussion is preserved as an archive. Please do not modify it. No further edits should be made to this page.