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Timeline of the 2020 Atlantic hurricane season

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Timeline of the 2020 Atlantic hurricane season (edit | talk | history | protect | delete | links | watch | logs | views)

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The 2020 Atlantic hurricane season was the most active Atlantic hurricane season on record. It featured a total of 31 (sub)tropical cyclones, all but one of which became a named storm. Of those that did, 14 became hurricanes, with seven becoming a major hurricane; several underwent periods of rapid intensification during their lifetime. As this timeline provides comprehensive documentation of the season's tropical cyclone formations, strengthening, weakening, landfalls, extratropical transitions, and dissipations, I am nominating it for featured list. Drdpw (talk) 22:03, 17 June 2021 (UTC)[reply]

Oppose Support from Hurricane Noah

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The sources need a lot of love, there's outdated/incorrect information throughout the article, and a large reliance on operational data. There are mostly minor prose and image issues as well. I will leave more detailed comments later tonight after dinner and more tomorrow. NoahTalk 23:19, 17 June 2021 (UTC)[reply]

Supporting now that all of these issues are fixed. NoahTalk 00:16, 29 June 2021 (UTC)[reply]
Source Review
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Pass SR. NoahTalk 00:16, 29 June 2021 (UTC)[reply]

NHC advisories should be replaced with the TCR in text (they may be used for notes and such) in almost all cases. I will wait for you to do this before conducting a full SR. NoahTalk 01:15, 18 June 2021 (UTC)[reply]

Formatting
@Hurricane Noah: This same statement appears in scores of articles, including many that are GA-class and FL-class, without author mentioned.
The name may have been mentioned at one point, but it isn't now. Those refs should be fixed in the GAs and FLs, however, it isn't a critical issue for them. NoahTalk 22:37, 28 June 2021 (UTC)[reply]
Done. Drdpw (talk) 22:04, 28 June 2021 (UTC)[reply]
Done. Drdpw (talk) 22:04, 28 June 2021 (UTC)[reply]
  • For tropical cyclone reports, tropical cyclone report is not a work. It is part of the title of a report. "Tropical Cyclone Report: Tropical Storm Arthur". You also do not need to include the original report dates in citations. NoahTalk 20:48, 28 June 2021 (UTC)[reply]
Done. Drdpw (talk) 23:52, 28 June 2021 (UTC)[reply]
Done. Drdpw (talk) 23:52, 28 June 2021 (UTC)[reply]
  • FN11: Please use Andrew Latto for author name as that is what is used on most NHC products. It needs to be consistent in this article as well. Check for more occurrences. NoahTalk 20:48, 28 June 2021 (UTC)[reply]
Done. Drdpw (talk) 23:52, 28 June 2021 (UTC)[reply]
@Hurricane Noah: So, first and last name only, regardless of how the author is credited on the individual report? I went with how the author was named in each individual report. Drdpw (talk) 22:04, 28 June 2021 (UTC)[reply]
  • Yes, WP wants sources to be formatted consistently inside an article, which sometimes means you can't use middle initials as you don't know them for every author. NoahTalk 22:37, 28 June 2021 (UTC)[reply]
Done. Drdpw (talk) 23:52, 28 June 2021 (UTC)[reply]
  • FN38: Hurricane And Typhoon Updates "and" should not be capitalized. This should also be a series and not a work. NoahTalk 20:48, 28 June 2021 (UTC)[reply]
Done. Drdpw (talk) 22:04, 28 June 2021 (UTC)[reply]
Spot Checks
  • 06:00 UTC (1:00 a.m CDT) at 18.9°N 92.3°W – Tropical Storm Cristobal attains maximum sustained winds of 60 mph (95 km/h), while located about 40 mi (65 km) northwest of Ciudad del Carmen.[13] Statement supported by source. NoahTalk 20:48, 28 June 2021 (UTC)[reply]
  • 18:00 UTC (1:00 p.m. CDT) at 27.3°N 92.5°W – Hurricane Laura intensifies to Category 4 strength about 200 mi (320 km) south-southeast of Lake Charles.[24] Statement supported by source. NoahTalk 20:48, 28 June 2021 (UTC)[reply]
  • 18:00 UTC (1:00 p.m. CDT) at 28.9°N 96.5°W – Tropical Storm Beta weakens to a tropical depression inland, about 30 mi (45 km) north-northwest of Matagorda Bay.[36] Statement supported by source. NoahTalk 20:48, 28 June 2021 (UTC)[reply]
  • 23:00 UTC (6:00 p.m. CDT) at 29.8°N 93.1°W – Hurricane Delta makes landfall near Creole, Louisiana, with maximum winds of about 100 mph (155 km/h).[41] Statement supported by source. NoahTalk 20:48, 28 June 2021 (UTC)[reply]
  • 06:00 UTC (1:00 a.m. EST) at 14.9°N 80.4°W – Tropical Storm Eta becomes a hurricane about 310 mi (500 km) south of Grand Cayman.[44] Statement supported by source. NoahTalk 20:48, 28 June 2021 (UTC)[reply]
Pass spotchecks. NoahTalk 20:48, 28 June 2021 (UTC)[reply]
Lead
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Modified. Cut this clause, not really pertinent as ACE is not noted anywhere in the TL. Drdpw (talk) 08:48, 18 June 2021 (UTC)[reply]
Done. Drdpw (talk) 08:48, 18 June 2021 (UTC)[reply]
Done. Both now numerals. Drdpw (talk) 08:48, 18 June 2021 (UTC)[reply]
  • was the nation's deadliest and most destructive of the season. It killed at least 40 people after striking Louisiana on August 27 with winds of 150 mph (240 km/h), and caused at least $14 billion in damage. US-centric... ignores an additional 5 billion in damage as well as dozens of indirect deaths outside the US.
Modified. Hurricane Laura produced catastrophic storm surge levels, heavy rainfall, and spawned over a dozen tornadoes after striking Louisiana on August 27 with winds of 150 mph (240 km/h). The storm was responsible for 81 deaths and it caused over US$19 billion in damage across the Greater Antilles and the Southern United States.[6] Drdpw (talk) 08:48, 18 June 2021 (UTC)[reply]
  • Also causing significant loss of lives and widespread destruction were November hurricanes Eta and Iota, which made landfall in Central America as category 4 storms just two weeks apart. Also is redundant. You should specify the deaths and damage that these storms caused (collectively) as it was quite significant. I would even go as far as to mention the collective number of missing individuals considering it was quite high. NoahTalk 01:32, 18 June 2021 (UTC)[reply]
Modified. Causing significant late-season loss of life and widespread destruction were November hurricanes Eta and Iota, which made landfall in Central America as Category 4 storms just two weeks apart.[2] The storms left a toll of 184 deaths and 110 missing across the region, thousands of families lost their homes and livelihoods.[7]
  • The storms left a toll of 184 deaths and 110 missing across the region, thousands of families lost their homes and livelihoods. You need an "and" after the comma. NoahTalk 12:39, 19 June 2021 (UTC)[reply]
Done. Drdpw (talk) 18:15, 19 June 2021 (UTC)[reply]
Prose
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Done. Drdpw (talk) 19:16, 19 June 2021 (UTC)[reply]
Done. Drdpw (talk) 19:16, 19 June 2021 (UTC)[reply]
Done. Drdpw (talk) 21:40, 21 June 2021 (UTC)[reply]
Done. Drdpw (talk) 19:16, 19 June 2021 (UTC)[reply]
Done. Drdpw (talk) 19:16, 19 June 2021 (UTC)[reply]
Done. Drdpw (talk) 19:16, 19 June 2021 (UTC)[reply]
  • Tropical Storm Arthur reaches its peak intensity with maximum sustained winds of 60 mph (95 km/h) and a minimum barometric pressure of 990 mbar (29.23 inHg)[nb 3] about 190 mi (310 km) east-northeast of Cape Hatteras, North Carolina.[9] Comma after the pressure reading NoahTalk 02:09, 18 June 2021 (UTC)[reply]
Done. Drdpw (talk) 19:16, 19 June 2021 (UTC)[reply]
Done. Drdpw (talk) 19:16, 19 June 2021 (UTC)[reply]
Done. Drdpw (talk) 19:16, 19 June 2021 (UTC)[reply]
◆ Wikipedia Espanol does have a small Península de Atasta article; Wikidata has nothing for Atasta / Península de Atasta. Drdpw (talk) 19:16, 19 June 2021 (UTC)[reply]
Done. Drdpw (talk) 19:16, 19 June 2021 (UTC)[reply]
  • Tropical Storm Cristobal makes its second landfall between the mouth of the Mississippi River and Grand Isle in southeastern Louisiana with winds of 50 mph (85 km/h) and a central pressure of 992 mbar (29.29 inHg) Comma after Louisiana NoahTalk 02:09, 18 June 2021 (UTC)[reply]
Done. Drdpw (talk) 19:16, 19 June 2021 (UTC)[reply]
Done. Drdpw (talk) 19:16, 19 June 2021 (UTC)[reply]
Done. Drdpw (talk) 19:16, 19 June 2021 (UTC)[reply]
Done. Drdpw (talk) 19:16, 19 June 2021 (UTC)[reply]
Done. Drdpw (talk) 19:16, 19 June 2021 (UTC)[reply]
  • Tropical Storm Edouard becomes post-tropical about 445 mi (715 km) southeast of Cape Race, Newfoundland[17] and subsequently dissipates.[15] Comma after Newfoundland. Any reason why there is a ref in the middle of a sentence? NoahTalk 02:09, 18 June 2021 (UTC)[reply]
Modified. Tropical Storm Edouard becomes extratropical about 490 mi (785 km) east-southeast of Cape Race, Newfoundland, and subsequently dissipates. Drdpw (talk) 19:16, 19 June 2021 (UTC)[reply]
Done. Drdpw (talk) 19:16, 19 June 2021 (UTC)[reply]
Modified. period → comma after New York City. Drdpw (talk) 19:16, 19 June 2021 (UTC)[reply]
  • Tropical Depression Seven forms from a broad low pressure system moving slowly westward within the Intertropical Convergence Zone (ITCZ) about 1,440 mi (2,315 km) east of the southern Windward Islands Comma after ITCZ NoahTalk 02:09, 18 June 2021 (UTC)[reply]
  • Tropical wave should be linked on the first mention
Done. Drdpw (talk) 19:16, 19 June 2021 (UTC)[reply]
  • Tropical Depression Eight forms from a tropical wave over the central Gulf of Mexico about 240 mi (385 km) south-southeast of the mouth of the Mississippi River Comma after Mexico NoahTalk 02:09, 18 June 2021 (UTC)[reply]
Done. Drdpw (talk) 19:16, 19 June 2021 (UTC)[reply]
  • Tropical Storm Gonzalo reaches its peak intensity of 65 mph (105 km/h) maximum sustained winds and minimum barometric pressure of 997 mbar (hPa; 29.44 inHg) while located about 690 mi (1,110 km) east of the southern Windward Islands. Comma after pressure reading NoahTalk 02:09, 18 June 2021 (UTC)[reply]
Done. Drdpw (talk) 19:16, 19 June 2021 (UTC)[reply]
Done. Drdpw (talk) 19:16, 19 June 2021 (UTC)[reply]
Done. Drdpw (talk) 19:16, 19 June 2021 (UTC)[reply]
  • Hurricane Hanna reaches its peak intensity of 90 mph (150 km/h) maximum sustained winds and minimum barometric pressure of 973 mbar (hPa; 28.73 inHg) This is worded strangely. It would also be worth mentioning it was a Category 2 hurricane as well. NoahTalk 02:09, 18 June 2021 (UTC)[reply]
Modified. Hurricane Hanna attains its peak intensity with maximum sustained winds of 90 mph (150 km/h) and minimum barometric pressure of 973 mbar (hPa; 28.73 inHg). Drdpw (talk) 19:16, 19 June 2021 (UTC)[reply]
Done. Drdpw (talk) 19:16, 19 June 2021 (UTC)[reply]
  • Hurricane Hanna makes a second landfall about 15 miles (25 km) north-northwest of Port Mansfield, Texas with maximum sustained winds of 90 mph (150 km/h) Comma after Texas NoahTalk 02:09, 18 June 2021 (UTC)[reply]
Done. Drdpw (talk) 19:16, 19 June 2021 (UTC)[reply]
Done. Drdpw (talk) 19:16, 19 June 2021 (UTC)[reply]
Done. Drdpw (talk) 19:16, 19 June 2021 (UTC)[reply]
  • Tropical Storm Isaias strengthens into a hurricane shortly after emerging over the Atlantic Ocean while its eye was located just offshore of the northern coast of Hispaniola Comma after Atlantic Ocean NoahTalk 02:09, 18 June 2021 (UTC)[reply]
Done. Drdpw (talk) 19:16, 19 June 2021 (UTC)[reply]
Done. Drdpw (talk) 19:16, 19 June 2021 (UTC)[reply]
  • Tropical Depression Ten degenerates to a remnant low while located about 230 mi (370 km) north of the Cabo Verde Islands and later dissipates Comma after CV Islands NoahTalk 02:28, 18 June 2021 (UTC)[reply]
Done. Drdpw (talk) 19:16, 19 June 2021 (UTC)[reply]
Done. Drdpw (talk) 19:16, 19 June 2021 (UTC)[reply]
  • Hurricane Isaias reaches its peak intensity with maximum sustained winds of 90 mph (145 km/h) and a minimum barometric pressure of 986 mbar (29.12 inHg) while located just off the coast of South Carolina Comma after pressure reading NoahTalk 02:28, 18 June 2021 (UTC)[reply]
Done. Drdpw (talk) 19:16, 19 June 2021 (UTC)[reply]
  • Hurricane Isaias makes its fourth and final landfall near Ocean Isle Beach, North Carolina with maximum sustained winds of 90 mph (150 km/h) Comma after NC NoahTalk 02:28, 18 June 2021 (UTC)[reply]
Done. Drdpw (talk) 19:16, 19 June 2021 (UTC)[reply]
  • Tropical Storm Isaias transitions to an extratropical low about 5 mi (10 km) west-northwest of Rutland, Vermont and later dissipates Link Vermont and add a comma after it NoahTalk 02:28, 18 June 2021 (UTC)[reply]
Done. Drdpw (talk) 19:16, 19 June 2021 (UTC)[reply]
Done. Drdpw (talk) 19:16, 19 June 2021 (UTC)[reply]
  • Tropical Storm Kyle develops from a mesoscale convective system offshore of the Outer Banks about 105 mi (170 km) east-northeast of Duck, North Carolina Pick one location reference NoahTalk 02:28, 18 June 2021 (UTC)[reply]
Done. Going with Duck, NC. Drdpw (talk) 19:16, 19 June 2021 (UTC)[reply]
Done. Drdpw (talk) 19:16, 19 June 2021 (UTC)[reply]
  • Tropical Storm Kyle moves over the Gulf Stream, where attains its peak intensity with maximum sustained winds of 50 mph (80 km/h) and a minimum pressure at 1,000 mbr (29.53inHg) about 230 mi (370 km) southeast of Cape Cod, Massachusetts Comma after pressure reading NoahTalk 02:28, 18 June 2021 (UTC)[reply]
Done. Drdpw (talk) 19:16, 19 June 2021 (UTC)[reply]
  • Tropical Storm Kyle becomes extratropical roughly 545 mi (880 km) southwest of Cape Race, Newfoundland and is absorbed by a nearby stationary front Comma after Newfoundland NoahTalk 02:28, 18 June 2021 (UTC)[reply]
Done. Drdpw (talk) 19:16, 19 June 2021 (UTC)[reply]
  • Tropical Storm Josephine weakens to a tropical depression as it passes to the north of the Leeward Islands and later dissipates Comma after Leeward Islands NoahTalk 02:28, 18 June 2021 (UTC)[reply]
Done. Drdpw (talk) 19:16, 19 June 2021 (UTC)[reply]
Done. Drdpw (talk) 19:16, 19 June 2021 (UTC)[reply]
Done. Drdpw (talk) 19:16, 19 June 2021 (UTC)[reply]
Modified. Tropical Storm Laura moves offshore from the western tip of Cuba into the Gulf of Mexico. Drdpw (talk) 19:16, 19 June 2021 (UTC)[reply]
Done. Drdpw (talk) 19:16, 19 June 2021 (UTC)[reply]
Done. Drdpw (talk) 19:16, 19 June 2021 (UTC)[reply]
  • Hurricane Laura reaches its peak intensity with maximum sustained winds of 150 mph (240 km/h) and minimum pressure 937 mbar (27.67 inHg)[36] about 120 mi (190 km) south of Lake Charles Comma after pressure reading NoahTalk 02:28, 18 June 2021 (UTC)[reply]
Done. Drdpw (talk) 19:16, 19 June 2021 (UTC)[reply]
Done. Drdpw (talk) 19:16, 19 June 2021 (UTC)[reply]
Done. Drdpw (talk) 19:16, 19 June 2021 (UTC)[reply]
Done. Drdpw (talk) 19:16, 19 June 2021 (UTC)[reply]
  • Tropical Depression Fifteen strengthens into Tropical Storm Omar about 115 mi (185 km) southeast of Cape Hatteras, North Carolina and simultaneously reaches its peak intensity with sustained winds of 40 mph (65 km/h) and a minimum pressure of 1,003 mbar (29.6 inHg) Comma after NC NoahTalk 02:47, 18 June 2021 (UTC)[reply]
Done. Drdpw (talk) 19:16, 19 June 2021 (UTC)[reply]
  • Tropical Storm Nana becomes a category 1 hurricane about 60 mi (95 km) southeast of Belize City, Belize and simultaneously reaches its peak intensity with sustained winds of 75 mph (120 km/h) and a minimum central pressure of 994 mbar (29.36 inHg). Comma after Belize NoahTalk 02:47, 18 June 2021 (UTC)[reply]
Done. Drdpw (talk) 19:16, 19 June 2021 (UTC)[reply]
◆ No link for Sittee Point.
Done. Drdpw (talk) 19:16, 19 June 2021 (UTC)[reply]
  • ropical Depression Nana degenerates into a remnant low and dissipates over the mountainous terrain of western Guatemala shortly thereafter Comma after RL NoahTalk 02:47, 18 June 2021 (UTC)[reply]
Done. Drdpw (talk) 19:16, 19 June 2021 (UTC)[reply]
  • Tropical Depression Omar degenerates into a remnant low about 575 mi (925 km) northeast of Bermuda and is later absorbed by a frontal system Comma after Bermuda NoahTalk 02:47, 18 June 2021 (UTC)[reply]
Done. Drdpw (talk) 19:16, 19 June 2021 (UTC)[reply]
  • Tropical Depression Nineteen makes landfall about 10 mi (15 km) south-southeast of Miami, Florida with winds of 35 mph (55 km/h). Comma after Florida NoahTalk 02:47, 18 June 2021 (UTC)[reply]
Done. Drdpw (talk) 19:16, 19 June 2021 (UTC)[reply]
  • Tropical Depression Nineteen becomes Tropical Storm Sally while the center was located over the Everglades about 30 mi (50 km) west of Homestead, Florida Whose center? NoahTalk 02:47, 18 June 2021 (UTC)[reply]
Done. Drdpw (talk) 19:16, 19 June 2021 (UTC)[reply]
Done. Drdpw (talk) 19:16, 19 June 2021 (UTC)[reply]
  • Hurricane Paulette makes landfall near Tucker's Town, Bermuda as a category 2 hurricane with sustained winds of 100 mph (160 km/h) and a minimum pressure of 970 mbar (28.64 inHg) Comma after Bermuda and hurricane NoahTalk 02:47, 18 June 2021 (UTC)[reply]
Done. Drdpw (talk) 19:16, 19 June 2021 (UTC)[reply]
Done. Drdpw (talk) 19:16, 19 June 2021 (UTC)[reply]
  • Hurricane Sally reaches its peak intensity as it makes landfall near Gulf Shores, Alabama with maximum sustained winds of 110 mph (175 km/h) and a minimum central pressure of 965 mbar (28.50 inHg) Comma after Alabama NoahTalk 02:47, 18 June 2021 (UTC)[reply]
Done. Drdpw (talk) 19:16, 19 June 2021 (UTC)[reply]
Modified. velocity → intensity. Drdpw (talk) 19:16, 19 June 2021 (UTC)[reply]
Done. Drdpw (talk) 19:16, 19 June 2021 (UTC)[reply]
  • Tropical Depression Vicky becomes a remnant low about 920 mi (1,480 km) west-northwest of the northwesternmost Cabo Verde Islands and subsequently dissipates Comma after CV Islands NoahTalk 02:47, 18 June 2021 (UTC)[reply]
Done. Drdpw (talk) 19:16, 19 June 2021 (UTC)[reply]
  • Subtropical Storm Alpha reaches its peak intensity with sustained winds of 50 mph (80 km/h) and a minimum pressure of 996 mbar (29.41 inHg) about 260 mi (420 km) west-southwest of Lisbon, Portugal Comma after pressure reading NoahTalk 02:47, 18 June 2021 (UTC)[reply]
Done. Drdpw (talk) 21:52, 19 June 2021 (UTC)[reply]
  • Subtropical Storm Alpha makes landfall about 10 mi (15 km) south of Figueira da Foz, Portugal with winds estimated at 50 mph (80 km/h) Comma after Portugal NoahTalk 02:47, 18 June 2021 (UTC)[reply]
Done. Drdpw (talk) 21:52, 19 June 2021 (UTC)[reply]
  • Subtropical Depression Alpha degenerates to a post-tropical remnant low near Viseu, Portugal.[74] and subsequently dissipates sentence fragment here. Should be a comma instead of a period. NoahTalk 02:47, 18 June 2021 (UTC)[reply]
Done. Drdpw (talk) 21:52, 19 June 2021 (UTC)[reply]
  • Tropical Storm Paulette degenerates into a remnant low again about 690 mi (1,110 km) southeast of the Azores and subsequently dissipates Comma after Azores NoahTalk 02:47, 18 June 2021 (UTC)[reply]
Done. Drdpw (talk) 21:52, 19 June 2021 (UTC)[reply]
Done. Drdpw (talk) 21:52, 19 June 2021 (UTC)[reply]
Done. Drdpw (talk) 21:52, 19 June 2021 (UTC)[reply]
Done. Drdpw (talk) 21:52, 19 June 2021 (UTC)[reply]
  • Hurricane Delta reaches its peak intensity with maximum winds of 140 mph (225 km/h) and a minimum pressure of 953 mbar (28.14 inHg) about 200 mi (320 km) south of the Isle of Youth, Cuba Comma after pressure reading NoahTalk 10:44, 18 June 2021 (UTC)[reply]
Done. Drdpw (talk) 21:52, 19 June 2021 (UTC)[reply]
Done. Drdpw (talk) 21:52, 19 June 2021 (UTC)[reply]
Done. Drdpw (talk) 21:52, 19 June 2021 (UTC)[reply]
  • Hurricane Delta weakens to category 1 strength inland along the Louisiana coast about 25 mi (40 km) west-southwest of Jennings, Louisiana Comma after coast NoahTalk 10:44, 18 June 2021 (UTC)[reply]
Done. Drdpw (talk) 21:52, 19 June 2021 (UTC)[reply]
Done. Drdpw (talk) 21:52, 19 June 2021 (UTC)[reply]
Done. Drdpw (talk) 21:52, 19 June 2021 (UTC)[reply]
  • Hurricane Epsilon reaches peak intensity with maximum winds of 115 mph (185 km/h) and a minimum pressure of 952 mbar (28.11 inHg) while about 345 mi (555 km) southeast of Bermuda Comma after pressure measurement NoahTalk 10:44, 18 June 2021 (UTC)[reply]
Done. Drdpw (talk) 21:52, 19 June 2021 (UTC)[reply]
  • Tropical Depression Twenty-Eight forms from the combination of a tropical wave and a midlevel trough about 70 mi (115 km) southwest of Grand Cayman. Should be mid-level NoahTalk 10:44, 18 June 2021 (UTC)[reply]
Done. Drdpw (talk) 21:52, 19 June 2021 (UTC)[reply]
Done. Drdpw (talk) 21:52, 19 June 2021 (UTC)[reply]
  • Tropical Storm Epsilon becomes extratropical about 565 mi (910 km) east of Cape Race, Newfoundland and later merges with a larger extratropical low Comma after Newfoundland NoahTalk 10:44, 18 June 2021 (UTC)[reply]
Done. Drdpw (talk) 21:52, 19 June 2021 (UTC)[reply]
Done. Drdpw (talk) 21:52, 19 June 2021 (UTC)[reply]
  • Tropical Storm Zeta moves offshore of the northern coast of the Yucatán Peninsula about 25 mi (40 km) north-northeast of Progreso. Comma after Peninsula NoahTalk 10:44, 18 June 2021 (UTC)[reply]
Done. Drdpw (talk) 21:52, 19 June 2021 (UTC)[reply]
  • Tropical Storm Zeta transitions into a post-tropical cyclone about 25 mi (45 km) south-southeast of Charlottesville, Virginia[102] and later dissipates Comma after Virginia NoahTalk 10:44, 18 June 2021 (UTC)[reply]
Done. Drdpw (talk) 21:52, 19 June 2021 (UTC)[reply]
  • Hurricane Eta reaches its peak intensity with maximum sustained winds of 150 mph (240 km/h) and a minimum central pressure of 929 mbar (27.43 inHg) about 65 mi (100 km) east-southeast of Puerto Cabezas, Nicaragua Comma after pressure reading. Also, that's not the peak. Peak intensity is determined by pressure, not winds. NoahTalk 10:44, 18 June 2021 (UTC)[reply]
Modified. Changed to, Hurricane Eta attains maximum sustained winds of 150 mph (240 km/h) and a minimum central pressure of 929 mbar (27.43 inHg), about 65 mi (100 km) east-southeast of Puerto Cabezas, Nicaragua. Drdpw (talk) 21:40, 21 June 2021 (UTC)[reply]
  • Hurricane Eta maintains its peak intensity with maximum sustained winds remaining near 150 mph (240 km/h) and minimum pressure falling to 922 mbar (27.23 inHg) This could do without the detailed wind portion. NoahTalk 10:44, 18 June 2021 (UTC)[reply]
Modified. Changed to, Hurricane Eta attains its peak intensity when its minimum pressure falls to 922 mbar (27.23 inHg). Drdpw (talk) 21:40, 21 June 2021 (UTC)[reply]
  • Hurricane Eta makes landfall about 15 mi (25 km) south-southwest of Puerto Cabezas with maximum sustained winds of 140 mph (220 km/h) Comma after Puerto Cabezas NoahTalk 10:44, 18 June 2021 (UTC)[reply]
Done. Drdpw (talk) 21:52, 19 June 2021 (UTC)[reply]
  • Disturbance Eta emerges over the Gulf of Honduras Disturbance is not an official status for a TC. It would be the remnants of Eta or something similar. NoahTalk 10:44, 18 June 2021 (UTC)[reply]
Modified. disturbance → remnants Also, added about 65 mi 100 km) west-northwest of La Ceiba, Honduras. Drdpw (talk) 21:52, 19 June 2021 (UTC)[reply]
Modified. disturbance → remnants and east of Belize → roughly 100 mi (160 km) west-northwest of La Ceiba. Drdpw (talk) 21:52, 19 June 2021 (UTC)[reply]
Done. Drdpw (talk) 21:52, 19 June 2021 (UTC)[reply]
Done. Drdpw (talk) 21:52, 19 June 2021 (UTC)[reply]
  • Tropical Storm Eta re-strengthens into a hurricane and simultaneously reaches its second peak intensity with sustained winds of 75 mph (120 km/h)[103] about 130 mi (210 km) west-southwest of Fort Myers, Florida Comma after wind speed NoahTalk 10:44, 18 June 2021 (UTC)[reply]
Done. Drdpw (talk) 21:52, 19 June 2021 (UTC)[reply]
Done. Drdpw (talk) 21:52, 19 June 2021 (UTC)[reply]
Done. Drdpw (talk) 21:52, 19 June 2021 (UTC)[reply]
  • Hurricane Iota attains its peak intensity with maximum winds of 155 mph (250 km/h) and a minimum pressure of 917 mbar (27.08 inHg) about 25 mi (35 km) northwest of Providencia Island Comma after pressure measurement NoahTalk 10:44, 18 June 2021 (UTC)[reply]
Done. Drdpw (talk) 21:52, 19 June 2021 (UTC)[reply]
Done. Drdpw (talk) 21:52, 19 June 2021 (UTC)[reply]
Done. Drdpw (talk) 21:52, 19 June 2021 (UTC)[reply]
Done. Drdpw (talk) 19:05, 25 June 2021 (UTC)[reply]
Notes
  • The remnants of Nana emerged over the Gulf of Tehuantepec on September 4 where they later regenerated into Tropical Storm Julio. The TCR states the remnants of Nana were responsible for the formation of TS Julio but doesn't state exactly how so. To say they directly regenerated into Julio is WP:OR. NoahTalk 11:00, 18 June 2021 (UTC)[reply]
Modified Drdpw (talk) 22:52, 18 June 2021 (UTC)[reply]
  • At the time, the National Hurricane Center did not name the system at that point because it was unclear whether it had a well-defined low-level-circulation.[50] However, with the storm posing an imminent threat to Central America, the National Hurricane Center initiated advisories on the system as Potential Tropical Cyclone Sixteen that day at at 15:00 UTC (10:00 a.m. CDT) Typo NoahTalk 11:00, 18 June 2021 (UTC)[reply]
Fixed Drdpw (talk) 22:52, 18 June 2021 (UTC)[reply]
  • An average Atlantic hurricane season, as defined by the National Oceanic and Atmospheric Administration, has 12 tropical storms, six hurricanes and two major hurricanes Missing Oxford comma NoahTalk 11:00, 18 June 2021 (UTC)[reply]
Fixed Drdpw (talk) 22:52, 18 June 2021 (UTC)[reply]
Pre-SR Source Issues
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Tons of sourcing issues remain. This pertains to outdated operational sources being used when more up-to-date information is in the TCRs. The locations in these need to be adjusted based upon the TCR. I didn't mention this much below, but if the best track doesn't show every status change, you don't mention the ones not shown. Only display the status changes that the TCR has. NoahTalk 19:43, 25 June 2021 (UTC)[reply]

@Hurricane Noah: Fixes and modifications completed. Drdpw (talk) 20:10, 28 June 2021 (UTC)[reply]
  • 06:00 UTC (1:00 a.m CDT) at 18.9°N 92.3°W – Tropical Storm Cristobal attains maximum sustained winds of 60 mph (95 km/h),[13] while located about 45 mi (70 km) northwest of Ciudad del Carmen.[14] Operational sourcing should be removed and location should be adjusted if needed using the method you used for the others. NoahTalk 19:43, 25 June 2021 (UTC)[reply]
Done. Drdpw (talk) 00:25, 28 June 2021 (UTC)[reply]
  • 12:00 UTC (8:00 a.m. AST) at 39.4°N 62.7°W – Subtropical Storm Dolly transitions into a tropical storm and simultaneously reaches its peak intensity with 45 mph (75 km/h) maximum sustained winds and minimum barometric pressure of 1,000 mbar (29.53 inHg),[15] while located about 370 mi (600 km) south-southeast of Halifax.[16] Same thing. NoahTalk 19:43, 25 June 2021 (UTC)[reply]
Done. Drdpw (talk) 00:25, 28 June 2021 (UTC)[reply]
Done. Drdpw (talk) 00:25, 28 June 2021 (UTC)[reply]
  • 21:00 UTC (5:00 p.m. AST) at 11.0°N 63.0°W – Tropical Depression Gonzalo degrades to a tropical wave roughly 125 mi (195 km) west-northwest of Trinidad, and then dissipates.[21] TCR doesnt mention this so this point needs removed. NoahTalk 19:43, 25 June 2021 (UTC)[reply]
Done. Drdpw (talk) 00:25, 28 June 2021 (UTC)[reply]
  • 06:00 UTC (1:00 a.m. CDT) at 26.5°N 98.5°W – Hurricane Hanna weakens to a tropical storm roughly 30 mi (50 km) northwest of McAllen, Texas.[22] Needs TCR sourcing/Location adjustment. NoahTalk 19:43, 25 June 2021 (UTC)[reply]
Done. Drdpw (talk) 00:25, 28 June 2021 (UTC)[reply]
  • 03:00 UTC (10:00 p.m. CDT, August 24) at 29.0°N 89.8°W – Tropical Storm Marco weakens to a tropical depression about 45 mi (70 km) west of the mouth of the Mississippi River.[30] Same thing. NoahTalk 19:43, 25 June 2021 (UTC)[reply]
Done. Drdpw (talk) 00:25, 28 June 2021 (UTC)[reply]
  • 03:00 UTC (10:00 p.m. CDT, August 27) at 35.1°N 92.0°W – Tropical Storm Laura weakens to a tropical depression about 30 mi (50 km) north-northeast of Little Rock, Arkansas.[31] Same thing. NoahTalk 19:43, 25 June 2021 (UTC)[reply]
Done. Drdpw (talk) 00:25, 28 June 2021 (UTC)[reply]
  • 09:00 UTC (4:00 a.m. CDT) at 16.7°N 88.8°W – Hurricane Nana weakens to a tropical storm about 70 mi (110 km) southwest of Belize City.[35] Same thing. NoahTalk 19:43, 25 June 2021 (UTC)[reply]
Done. Drdpw (talk) 00:25, 28 June 2021 (UTC)[reply]
  • 00:00 UTC (11:00 p.m. CVT, September 7) at 16.2°N 22.8°W – Tropical Storm Rene makes landfall on Boa Vista Island with sustained winds of 40 mph (65 km/h) and a minimum barometric pressure of 1,001 mbar (29.6 inHg).[38] Same thing. NoahTalk 19:43, 25 June 2021 (UTC)[reply]
Done. Drdpw (talk) 00:25, 28 June 2021 (UTC)[reply]
  • 06:00 UTC (2:00 a.m. EDT) at 25.7°N 80.2°W – Tropical Depression Nineteen makes landfall about 10 mi (15 km) south-southeast of Miami, Florida, with winds of 35 mph (55 km/h).[40] Same thing. NoahTalk 19:43, 25 June 2021 (UTC)[reply]
Done. Drdpw (talk) 00:25, 28 June 2021 (UTC)[reply]
  • 05:00 UTC (12:00 a.m. CDT) at 29.8°N 87.8°W – Hurricane Sally intensifies to a Category 2 hurricane about 65 mi (105 km) south-southeast of Mobile, Alabama.[43] Same thing. NoahTalk 19:43, 25 June 2021 (UTC)[reply]
Done. Drdpw (talk) 00:25, 28 June 2021 (UTC)[reply]
  • 13:00 UTC (8:00 a.m. CDT) at 30.5°N 87.6°W – Hurricane Sally weakens inland to a Category 1 hurricane about 20 mi (30 km) north-northeast of Gulf Shores, Alabama.[44] Ditto. NoahTalk 19:43, 25 June 2021 (UTC)[reply]
Done. Drdpw (talk) 00:25, 28 June 2021 (UTC)[reply]
  • 15:00 UTC (11:00 a.m. AST) at 16.5°N 49.7°W – Hurricane Teddy strengthens to Category 2 intensity about 775 mi (1,245 km) east of the Lesser Antilles.[45] Ditto. NoahTalk 19:43, 25 June 2021 (UTC)[reply]
Done. Drdpw (talk) 00:25, 28 June 2021 (UTC)[reply]
  • 18:00 UTC (1:00 p.m. CDT) at 30.9°N 87.1°W – Hurricane Sally weakens to a tropical storm about 30 mi (45 km) north-northeast of Pensacola, Florida.[46] Ditto. NoahTalk 19:43, 25 June 2021 (UTC)[reply]
Done. Drdpw (talk) 00:25, 28 June 2021 (UTC)[reply]
  • 21:00 UTC (4:00 p.m. CDT) at 24.3°N 93.1°W – Tropical Depression Twenty-Two becomes Tropical Storm Beta about 280 mi (450 km) east-southeast of the mouth of the Rio Grande.[51] Ditto. NoahTalk 19:43, 25 June 2021 (UTC)[reply]
Done. Drdpw (talk) 00:25, 28 June 2021 (UTC)[reply]
  • 00:00 UTC (8:00 p.m. AST, September 21) at 34.6°N 61.4°W – Hurricane Teddy re-strengthens to a Category 2 hurricane about 250 mi (400 km) northeast of Bermuda.[53] Ditto. NoahTalk 19:43, 25 June 2021 (UTC)[reply]
Done. Drdpw (talk) 00:25, 28 June 2021 (UTC)[reply]
  • 15:00 UTC (10:00 a.m. CDT) at 28.9°N 96.7°W – Tropical Storm Beta weakens to a tropical depression inland, about 15 mi (25 km) east-northeast of Victoria, Texas.[54] Ditto. NoahTalk 19:43, 25 June 2021 (UTC)[reply]
Done. Drdpw (talk) 00:25, 28 June 2021 (UTC)[reply]
  • 00:00 UTC (8:00 p.m. EDT, October 5) at 16.5°N 79.6°W – Tropical Storm Delta becomes a Category 1 hurricane about 220 mi (355 km) south-southeast of Grand Cayman.[57] Ditto. NoahTalk 19:48, 25 June 2021 (UTC)[reply]
Done. Drdpw (talk) 19:21, 28 June 2021 (UTC)[reply]
  • 09:00 UTC (5:00 a.m. EDT) at 17.5°N 81.3°W – Hurricane Delta attains Category 2 intensity about 125 mi (200 km) south of Grand Cayman.[58] Ditto. NoahTalk 19:48, 25 June 2021 (UTC)[reply]
Done. Drdpw (talk) 19:21, 28 June 2021 (UTC)[reply]
  • 12:00 UTC (8:00 a.m. EDT) at 17.8°N 82.0°W – Hurricane Delta strengthens to Category 3 intensity[56] about (115 mi (185 km) south-southwest of Grand Cayman.[59] Ditto. NoahTalk 19:48, 25 June 2021 (UTC)[reply]
Done. Drdpw (talk) 19:21, 28 June 2021 (UTC)[reply]
  • 06:00 UTC (1:00 a.m. CDT) at 23.0°N 91.3°W – Hurricane Delta re-strengthens to Category 2 intensity about 485 mi (780 km) south-southeast of Cameron, Louisiana.[60] Ditto. NoahTalk 19:48, 25 June 2021 (UTC)[reply]
Done. Drdpw (talk) 19:21, 28 June 2021 (UTC)[reply]
  • 18:00 UTC (1:00 p.m. CDT) at 28.7°N 93.6°W – Hurricane Delta weakens to Category 2 intensity about 80 mi (130 km) south-southwest of Cameron.[61] Ditto. NoahTalk 19:48, 25 June 2021 (UTC)[reply]
Done. Drdpw (talk) 19:21, 28 June 2021 (UTC)[reply]
  • 23:00 UTC (6:00 p.m. CDT) at 29.8°N 93.1°W – Hurricane Delta makes landfall near Creole, Louisiana, with maximum winds of about 100 mph (155 km/h).[62] Ditto. NoahTalk 19:48, 25 June 2021 (UTC)[reply]
Done. Drdpw (talk) 19:21, 28 June 2021 (UTC)[reply]
  • 00:00 UTC (7:00 p.m. CDT, October 9) at 30.0°N 93.0°W – Hurricane Delta weakens to Category 1 strength inland along the Louisiana coast, about 25 mi (40 km) west-southwest of Jennings, Louisiana.[63] Ditto. NoahTalk 19:48, 25 June 2021 (UTC)[reply]
Done. Drdpw (talk) 19:21, 28 June 2021 (UTC)[reply]
  • 06:00 UTC (1:00 a.m. CDT) at 31.2°N 92.3°W – Hurricane Delta weakens to tropical storm intensity about 15 mi (25 km) east-southeast of Alexandria, Louisiana.[64] Ditto. NoahTalk 19:48, 25 June 2021 (UTC)[reply]
Done. Drdpw (talk) 19:21, 28 June 2021 (UTC)[reply]
  • 18:00 UTC {2:00 p.m. CDT) at 33.3°N 90.6°W – Tropical Storm Delta becomes extratropical about 70 mi (115 km) north of Jackson, Mississippi, and subsequently dissipates.[56] Incorrect bracket used for the 2:00 p.m. time. NoahTalk 19:48, 25 June 2021 (UTC)[reply]
Done. Drdpw (talk) 19:21, 28 June 2021 (UTC)[reply]
  • 09:00 UTC (4:00 a.m. CDT) at 21.0°N 88.4°W – Hurricane Zeta weakens to a tropical storm inland about 85 mi (140 km) east-southeast of Progreso, Yucatán.[67] Same sourcing issues. NoahTalk 19:48, 25 June 2021 (UTC)[reply]
Done. Drdpw (talk) 19:21, 28 June 2021 (UTC)[reply]
  • 15:00 UTC (10:00 a.m. CDT) at 21.6°N 89.5°W – Tropical Storm Zeta moves offshore of the northern coast of the Yucatán Peninsula, about 25 mi (40 km) north-northeast of Progreso.[68] Ditto. NoahTalk 19:48, 25 June 2021 (UTC)[reply]
Done. Drdpw (talk) 19:21, 28 June 2021 (UTC)[reply]
  • 06:00 UTC (1:00 a.m. CDT) at 24.4°N 91.5°W – Tropical Storm Zeta becomes a hurricane again about 410 mi (660 km) south of New Orleans, Louisiana.[69] Ditto. NoahTalk 19:59, 25 June 2021 (UTC)[reply]
Done. Drdpw (talk) 19:21, 28 June 2021 (UTC)[reply]
  • 00:00 UTC (7:00 p.m. CDT, October 28) at 30.2°N 89.9°W – Hurricane Zeta weakens to Category 2 intensity inland about 10 mi (15 km) southwest of Slidell, Louisiana.[70] Ditto. NoahTalk 19:59, 25 June 2021 (UTC)[reply]
Done. Drdpw (talk) 19:21, 28 June 2021 (UTC)[reply]
  • 01:00 UTC (8:00 p.m. CDT, October 28) at 30.7°N 89.6°W – Hurricane Zeta weakens to Category 1 intensity about 25 mi (40 km) north-northeast of Slidell.[71] Ditto. NoahTalk 19:59, 25 June 2021 (UTC)[reply]
Done. Drdpw (talk) 19:21, 28 June 2021 (UTC)[reply]
  • 06:00 UTC (1:00 a.m. CDT) at 32.9°N 87.4°W – Hurricane Zeta weakens to a tropical storm about 25 mi (40 km) south-southeast of Tuscaloosa, Alabama.[72] Ditto. NoahTalk 19:59, 25 June 2021 (UTC)[reply]
Done. Drdpw (talk) 19:21, 28 June 2021 (UTC)[reply]
  • 06:00 UTC (1:00 a.m. EST) at 14.0°N 82.8°W – Hurricane Eta attains its peak intensity when its minimum pressure falls to 922 mbar (27.23 inHg),[73] about 40 mi (65 km) east of Puerto Cabezas.[74] Ditto. NoahTalk 19:59, 25 June 2021 (UTC)[reply]
Done. Drdpw (talk) 19:21, 28 June 2021 (UTC)[reply]
  • 00:00 UTC (7:00 p.m. EST, November 3) at 13.8°N 83.7°W – Hurricane Eta weakens to Category 2 intensity about 25 mi (40 km) southwest of Puerto Cabezas.[75] Ditto. NoahTalk 19:59, 25 June 2021 (UTC)[reply]
Done. Drdpw (talk) 19:21, 28 June 2021 (UTC)[reply]
Done. Drdpw (talk) 19:21, 28 June 2021 (UTC)[reply]
  • 06:00 UTC (1:00 a.m. EST) at 13.0°N 77.0°W – Tropical Storm Iota strengthens into a hurricane about 295 mi (475 km) east of Providencia Island, Colombia.[81] Ditto. NoahTalk 19:59, 25 June 2021 (UTC)[reply]
Done. Drdpw (talk) 19:21, 28 June 2021 (UTC)[reply]
  • 00:00 UTC (7:00 p.m. EST, November 15) at 13.4°N 79.8°W – Hurricane Iota attains Category 2 strength about 110 mi (175 km) east of Providencia Island.[82] Ditto. NoahTalk 19:59, 25 June 2021 (UTC)[reply]
Done. Drdpw (talk) 19:21, 28 June 2021 (UTC)[reply]
  • 09:00 UTC (4:00 a.m. EST) at 13.7°N 84.3°W – Hurricane Iota weakens to Category 2 strength about 65 mi (105 km) west-southwest of Puerto Cabezas.[83] Ditto. NoahTalk 19:59, 25 June 2021 (UTC)[reply]
Done. Drdpw (talk) 19:21, 28 June 2021 (UTC)[reply]
Image Review
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Pass IR NoahTalk 10:21, 18 June 2021 (UTC)[reply]
Done. Drdpw (talk) 09:45, 18 June 2021 (UTC)[reply]
Done. Drdpw (talk) 09:45, 18 June 2021 (UTC)[reply]
Done. Drdpw (talk) 09:45, 18 June 2021 (UTC)[reply]
Done. Drdpw (talk) 09:45, 18 June 2021 (UTC)[reply]
  • A map plotting the track and intensity of Hurricane Paulette at 6-hour intervals during its September 7–28, 2020 lifetime A comma is needed after 2020 NoahTalk 03:09, 18 June 2021 (UTC)[reply]
Done. Drdpw (talk) 09:45, 18 June 2021 (UTC)[reply]
Everything looks good now. Thanks, Drdpw! That was a lot. codingcyclone advisories/damages 19:20, 25 June 2021 (UTC)[reply]

Support from codingcyclone

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Alright, there are a few inconsistencies that need to be addressed.

Timeline of events
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  • Link the storm articles.
Done. Drdpw (talk) 03:12, 22 June 2021 (UTC)[reply]
  • 6:00 UTC (2:00 a.m. EDT) at 31.5°N 78.8°W – Tropical Storm Bertha forms from a weak and elongated low very near the Georgia and South Carolina coasts. Use 06:00 UTC. "Very near" is weird wording. Use the actual distance to land. That can be found in the advisories.
Wording is from TCR, which does not state an actual distance to land. Drdpw (talk) 03:12, 22 June 2021 (UTC)[reply]
You have to use this to calculate the distance from land. Use the coordinates of a city the NHC mentioned and then the points in the TCR to calculate distance. NoahTalk 18:53, 22 June 2021 (UTC)[reply]
@Hurricane Noah: To be sure I follow you correctly prior to making more adjustments, please look at the most recent edit I made to the TL, to TS Bertha entries May 27, 06:00 UTC (2:00 a.m. EDT) and May 28 06:00 UTC (2:00 a.m. EDT). Cheers. Drdpw (talk) 00:20, 23 June 2021 (UTC)[reply]
Yeah, that looks fine. NoahTalk 00:31, 23 June 2021 (UTC)[reply]
Thank you. Drdpw (talk) 00:59, 23 June 2021 (UTC)[reply]
Done. Drdpw (talk) 00:59, 23 June 2021 (UTC)[reply]
  • 18:00 UTC (2:00 p.m. EDT) at 33.7°N 80.1°W – Tropical Storm Bertha weakens to a tropical depression approximately 65 mi (105 km) north-northwest of Charleston, South Carolina. Don't need the second source. Move the TCR to the end of the entry.
Advisory ref is source for distance to land, which is not stated in TCR. Drdpw (talk) 03:12, 22 June 2021 (UTC)[reply]
Done. Drdpw (talk) 00:59, 23 June 2021 (UTC)[reply]
  • 18:00 UTC (2:00 p.m. EDT) at 35.4°N 74.9°W – Tropical Storm Fay develops from a complex of thunderstorms associated with a low-pressure area about 40 mi (65 km) east-northeast of Cape Hatteras, North Carolina. Same problem.
Advisory ref is source for distance to land, which is not stated in TCR. Drdpw (talk) 03:12, 22 June 2021 (UTC)[reply]
Done. Drdpw (talk) 17:46, 24 June 2021 (UTC)[reply]
  • 12:00 UTC (7:00 a.m. CDT) at 17.7°N 91.2°W – Tropical Storm Cristobal weakens to a tropical depression while moving southeastward, just before reaching the Guatemala–Mexico border. Need the distance to land again.
Modified. Tropical Storm Cristobal weakens to a tropical depression over eastern Tabasco, near the Guatemala–Mexico border.
Done. Drdpw (talk) 17:46, 24 June 2021 (UTC)[reply]
  • 06:00 UTC (2:00 a.m. AST) at 39.0°N 63.9°W – Subtropical Depression Four intensifies into Subtropical Storm Dolly. Need distance to land.
{TCR does not state distance to land; no corresponding advisory. Drdpw (talk) 16:06, 22 June 2021 (UTC)[reply]
Done. Drdpw (talk) 17:46, 24 June 2021 (UTC)[reply]
  • 00:00 UTC (8:00 p.m. AST, July 5) at 36.4°N 58.5°W – Tropical Depression Five strengthens into Tropical Storm Edouard. Need distance to land.
TCR does not state distance to land; no corresponding advisory. Drdpw (talk) 16:06, 22 June 2021 (UTC)[reply]
Done. Drdpw (talk) 17:46, 24 June 2021 (UTC)[reply]
  • 06:00 UTC (2:00 a.m. EDT) at 41.5°N 74.2°W – Tropical Storm Fay weakens to a remnant low while over southeastern New York, roughly 50 mi (80 km) north of New York City. and is later absorbed into a larger mid-latitude low. Don't need the "while over southeastern New York" part, since that makes it redundant. Don't use the advisory.
Modified. (Using TCR only.) Tropical Storm Fay weakens to a remnant low inland over southeastern New York, and is later absorbed into a larger mid-latitude low. Drdpw (talk) 03:12, 22 June 2021 (UTC)[reply]
Done. Drdpw (talk) 17:46, 24 June 2021 (UTC)[reply]
  • 06:00 UTC (2:00 a.m. AST) at 9.8°N 41.9°W – Tropical Depression Seven intensifies into Tropical Storm Gonzalo. Need the distance to land.
TCR does not state distance to land; no corresponding advisory. Drdpw (talk) 16:06, 22 June 2021 (UTC)[reply]
Done. Drdpw (talk) 17:46, 24 June 2021 (UTC)[reply]
  • 00:00 UTC (8:00 p.m. AST July 30) at 19.9°N 71.2°W – Tropical Storm Isaias strengthens into a hurricane shortly after emerging over the Atlantic Ocean while its eye was located just offshore of the northern coast of Hispaniola. Needs distance to land.
Done. Drdpw (talk) 16:06, 22 June 2021 (UTC)[reply]
  • 18:00 UTC (2:00 p.m. EDT) at 24.8°N 79.3°W – Hurricane Isaias weakens to a tropical storm as it emerges back over the waters west of Andros Island. August 2 Needs distance to land as well.
Done. Drdpw (talk) 16:06, 22 June 2021 (UTC)[reply]
  • 00:00 UTC (8:00 p.m. EDT, August 3) at 32.8°N 79.1°W – Hurricane Isaias reaches its peak intensity with maximum sustained winds of 90 mph (145 km/h) and a minimum barometric pressure of 986 mbar (29.12 inHg) while located just off the coast of South Carolina. Needs distance to land.
Done. Drdpw (talk) 16:06, 22 June 2021 (UTC)[reply]
  • 18:00 UTC (2:00 p.m. AST) at 17.4°N 55.6°W – Tropical Storm Josephine attains its peak intensity with maximum sustained winds of 45 mph (70 km/h) and a minimum pressure at 1,004 mbar (29.65inHg). Needs space between "29.65" and "inHg". Also needs distance to land.
Done. Drdpw (talk) 16:06, 22 June 2021 (UTC)[reply]
  • 12:00 UTC (2:00 a.m. AST) at 38.8°N 66.7°W – Tropical Storm Kyle moves over the Gulf Stream, where attains its peak intensity with maximum sustained winds of 50 mph (80 km/h) and a minimum pressure at 1,000 mbr (29.53inHg) about 230 mi (370 km) southeast of Cape Cod, Massachusetts. Change "1,000 mbr (29.53inHg)" to "1,000 mbar (29.53 inHg)".
Done. Drdpw (talk) 16:06, 22 June 2021 (UTC)[reply]
  • 06:00 UTC (2:00 a.m. AST) at 20.0°N 63.4°W – Tropical Storm Josephine weakens to a tropical depression as it passes to the north of the Leeward Islands and later dissipates. Needs distance to land.
TCR does not state distance to land; no corresponding advisory. Drdpw (talk) 16:06, 22 June 2021 (UTC)[reply]
Done. Drdpw (talk) 17:46, 24 June 2021 (UTC)[reply]
  • 12:00 UTC (8:00 a.m. AST) at 17.0°N 59.4°W – Tropical Depression Thirteen strengthens into Tropical Storm Laura. Needs distance to land.
Done. Drdpw (talk) 16:06, 22 June 2021 (UTC)[reply]
  • 04:30 UTC (12:30 a.m. AST) at 18.4°N 70.0°W – Tropical Storm Laura makes landfall about 25 mi (35 km) west of Santo Domingo, Dominican Republic, with sustained winds of 50 mph (85 km/h) Needs ref and period.
Done. Drdpw (talk) 16:06, 22 June 2021 (UTC)[reply]
  • 12:00 UTC (7:00 a.m. CDT) at 24.3°N 87.2°W – Tropical Storm Marco strengthens to a category 1 hurricane about 210 mi (340 km) northwest of the western tip of Cuba, and simultaneously reaches its peak intensity with maximum sustained winds of 75 mph (120 km/h) and minimum pressure of 991 mbar (29.26 inHg). Capitalize "category".
Done. Drdpw (talk) 16:06, 22 June 2021 (UTC)[reply]
  • 06:00 UTC (2:00 a.m. EDT) at 20.5°N 78.0°W – Tropical Storm Laura emerges over the Caribbean Sea and moves roughly parallel to the southern coast of Cuba. Don't see a need for this point.
Detail removed. Drdpw (talk) 16:06, 22 June 2021 (UTC)[reply]
  • 06:00 UTC (1:00 a.m. CDT) at 25.6°N 90.2°W – Hurricane Laura intensifies to category 2 strength about 360 mi (580 km) south-southeast of Lake Charles, Louisiana. Don't need advisory ref.
Advisory ref is source for distance to land, which is not stated in TCR. Drdpw (talk) 16:06, 22 June 2021 (UTC)[reply]
Done. Drdpw (talk) 17:46, 24 June 2021 (UTC)[reply]
  • 12:00 UTC (7:00 a.m. CDT) at 26.4°N 91.4°W – Hurricane Laura intensifies to category 3 strength. Need distance to land.
Done. Drdpw (talk) 16:06, 22 June 2021 (UTC)[reply]
  • 18:00 UTC (1:00 p.m. CDT) at 27.3°N 92.5°W – Hurricane Laura intensifies to category 4 strength. Need distance to land.
Done. Drdpw (talk) 16:06, 22 June 2021 (UTC)[reply]
  • 06:00 UTC (2:00 a.m. EDT) at 38.3°N 84.8°W – Tropical Depression Laura degenerates into a remnant low over northern Kentucky and is later absorbed by another low. Distance to land needed.
TCR does not state a distance from location; no corresponding advisory. Drdpw (talk) 16:06, 22 June 2021 (UTC)[reply]
Done. Drdpw (talk) 17:46, 24 June 2021 (UTC)[reply]
  • 12:00 UTC (8:00 a.m. AST) at 18.4°N 35.3°W – Tropical Storm Rene attains its peak sustained wind speed of 45 mph (75 km/h). Distance to land needed.
TCR states only, "over the tropical eastern Atlantic." There is no corresponding advisory. Drdpw (talk) 16:06, 22 June 2021 (UTC)[reply]
Done. Drdpw (talk) 17:46, 24 June 2021 (UTC)[reply]
  • 06:00 UTC (1:00 a.m. CDT) at 28.2°N 86.5°W – Tropical Storm Sally becomes a category 1 hurricane about 145 mi (230 km) south of Pensacola, Florida. Capitalize "category".
Done. Drdpw (talk) 16:06, 22 June 2021 (UTC)[reply]
  • 06:00 UTC (5:00 a.m. CVT) at 18.0°N 28.3°W – Tropical Depression Twenty-One strengthens and becomes Tropical Storm Vicky. Need distance to land.
TCR does not state distance to land; no corresponding advisory. Drdpw (talk) 16:06, 22 June 2021 (UTC)[reply]
Done. Drdpw (talk) 17:46, 24 June 2021 (UTC)[reply]
  • 08:50 UTC (4:50 a.m. AST) at 32.3°N 64.7°W – Hurricane Paulette makes landfall near Tucker's Town, Bermuda as a category 2 hurricane with sustained winds of 100 mph (160 km/h) and a minimum pressure of 970 mbar (28.64 inHg) . No space between the end of the sentence and the period.
Done. Drdpw (talk) 16:06, 22 June 2021 (UTC)[reply]
  • 00:00 UTC (8:00 p.m. AST, September 15) at 14.7°N 48.0°W – Tropical Storm Teddy becomes a category 1 hurricane about 805 mi (1,295 km) east-northeast of Barbados. Capitalize "category".
Done. Drdpw (talk) 16:06, 22 June 2021 (UTC)[reply]
  • 05:00 UTC (12:00 a.m. CDT) at 29.8°N 87.8°W – Hurricane Sally intensifies to a category 2 hurricane about 65 mi (105 km) south-southeast of Mobile, Alabama. Capitalize "category".
Done. Drdpw (talk) 16:06, 22 June 2021 (UTC)[reply]
  • 06:00 UTC (2:00 a.m. AST) at 41.2°N 50.8°W – Hurricane Paulette weakens to Category 1 strength. Need distance to land.
TCR does not state distance to land; no corresponding advisory. Drdpw (talk) 16:06, 22 June 2021 (UTC)[reply]
Done. Drdpw (talk) 17:46, 24 June 2021 (UTC)[reply]
  • 15:00 UTC (11:00 AST) at 16.5°N 49.7°W – Hurricane Teddy strengthens to Category 2 velocity about 775 mi (1,245 km) east of the Lesser Antilles. p.m. or a.m.? Also, "Category 2 velocity" sounds weird.
Modified. velocity → intensity.; also, "a.m." added. Drdpw (talk) 16:06, 22 June 2021 (UTC)[reply]
  • 12:00 UTC (8:00 a.m. AST) at 21.6°N 37.6°W – Tropical Storm Vicky weakens to a tropical depression. Needs distance to land.
TCR does not state distance to land; no corresponding advisory. Drdpw (talk) 16:06, 22 June 2021 (UTC)[reply]
Done. Drdpw (talk) 17:46, 24 June 2021 (UTC)[reply]
  • 18:00 UTC (2:00 p.m. AST) at 19.7°N 53.7°W – Hurricane Teddy attains category 4 strength. Needs distance to land.
Done. Drdpw (talk) 17:46, 24 June 2021 (UTC)[reply]
  • 00:00 UTC (8:00 p.m. AST, September 17) at 20.4°N 54.4°W – Hurricane Teddy reaches its peak intensity with 140 mph (225 km/h) maximum winds and a minimum pressure of 945 mbar (27.91 inHg). Needs distance to land.
Done. Drdpw (talk) 17:46, 24 June 2021 (UTC)[reply]
  • 00:00 UTC (8:00 p.m. AST, September 17) at 11.1°N 29.3°W – Tropical Storm Wilfred attains its peak intensity with sustained winds of 40 mph (65 km/h) and a minimum pressure of 1,006 mbar (29.71 inHg). Needs distance to land.
Done. Drdpw (talk) 17:46, 24 June 2021 (UTC)[reply]
  • 12:00 UTC (8:00 a.m. AST) at 21.7°N 55.8°W – Hurricane Teddy weakens to Category 3 strength. Needs distance to land.
Done. Drdpw (talk) 17:46, 24 June 2021 (UTC)[reply]
  • 00:00 UTC (12:00 a.m. GMT) at 40.6°N 7.6°W – Subtropical Storm Alpha becomes a subtropical depression inland over north-central Portugal. Needs distance to land.
Done. Drdpw (talk) 17:46, 24 June 2021 (UTC)[reply]
  • 03:00 UTC (3:00 a.m. GMT) at 40.9°N 6.9°W – Subtropical Depression Alpha degenerates to a post-tropical remnant low near Viseu, Portugal. and subsequently dissipates. Needs distance to land, remove advisory ref, replace "Portugal." with "Portugal,".
Done. Drdpw (talk) 17:46, 24 June 2021 (UTC)[reply]
  • 00:00 UTC (8:00 p.m. AST, September 19) at 26.9°N 60.8°W – Hurricane Teddy weakens to category 2 strength about 435 mi (700 km) south-southeast of Bermuda. Capitalize "category", remove the extra advisory ref.
Done. Drdpw (talk) 17:46, 24 June 2021 (UTC)[reply]
  • 12:00 UTC (7:00 a.m. CDT) at 27.1°N 92.8°W – Tropical Storm Beta reaches its peak wind speed of 65 mph (105 km/h). Distance to land needed.
Done. Drdpw (talk) 17:46, 24 June 2021 (UTC)[reply]
  • 12:00 UTC (8:00 a.m. AST) at 15.4°N 43.2°W – Tropical Storm Wilfred weakens to a tropical depression. Distance to land needed.
Done. Drdpw (talk) 17:46, 24 June 2021 (UTC)[reply]
  • 18:00 UTC (2:00 p.m. AST) at 28.5°N 63.3°W – Hurricane Teddy weakens to a Category 1 hurricane about 270 mi (435 km) south-southeast of Bermuda. Remove advisory ref, move TCR ref to the end of the entry.
Done. Drdpw (talk) 17:46, 24 June 2021 (UTC)[reply]
  • 00:00 UTC (7:00 p.m. CDT, September 20) at 27.5°N 94.1°W – Tropical Storm Beta reaches a minimum pressure of 993 mbar (30.47 inHg). Needs distance to land.
Done. Drdpw (talk) 17:46, 24 June 2021 (UTC)[reply]
  • 12:00 UTC (8:00 a.m. AST) at 39.1°N 63.5°W – Hurricane Teddy reaches a secondary peak intensity of 105 mph (170 km/h). Needs distance to land.
Done. Drdpw (talk) 17:46, 24 June 2021 (UTC)[reply]
  • 18:00 UTC (2:00 p.m. AST) at 40.3°N 64.2°W – Hurricane Teddy weakens to category 1 strength about 300 mi (480 km) south of Halifax, Nova Scotia. Remove advisory ref, and put TCR ref at the end of the entry.
Done. Drdpw (talk) 17:46, 24 June 2021 (UTC)[reply]
  • 18:00 UTC (1:00 p.m. CDT) at 20.4°N 87.5°W – Hurricane Gamma weakens to a tropical storm inland over Quintana Roo. Distance to land needed.
Done. Drdpw (talk) 23:57, 24 June 2021 (UTC)[reply]
  • 06:00 UTC (1:00 a.m. CDT) at 21.8°N 88.2°W – Tropical Storm Gamma emerges over the extreme southern Gulf of Mexico with winds of 50 mph (80 km/h). Distance to land needed.
Done. Drdpw (talk) 23:57, 24 June 2021 (UTC)[reply]
  • 18:00 UTC (1:00 p.m. CDT) at 22.7°N 87.7°W – Tropical Storm Gamma reaches a secondary peak intensity of 65 mph (105 km/h). Distance to land needed.
Done. Drdpw (talk) 23:57, 24 June 2021 (UTC)[reply]
  • 03:00 UTC (10:00 p.m. CDT, October 5) at 21.6°N 88.4°W – Tropical Depression Gamma makes landfall near San Felipe, Yucatán and its circulation later dissipates. When does its circulation dissipate?
Done. Drdpw (talk) 23:57, 24 June 2021 (UTC)[reply]
  • 18:00 UTC {2:00 p.m. CDT) at 33.3°N 90.6°W – Tropical Storm Delta becomes extratropical over Mississippi and subsequently dissipates. Distance to land needed.
Done. Drdpw (talk) 23:57, 24 June 2021 (UTC)[reply]
  • 18:00 UTC (1:00 p.m. CDT) at 28.7°N 93.6°W – Hurricane Delta weakens to category 2 intensity about 80 mi (130 km) south-southwest of Cameron. Capitalize "category".
Done. Drdpw (talk) 23:57, 24 June 2021 (UTC)[reply]
  • 00:00 UTC (7:00 p.m. CDT, October 9) at 30.0°N 93.0°W – Hurricane Delta weakens to category 1 strength inland along the Louisiana coast about 25 mi (40 km) west-southwest of Jennings, Louisiana. Capitalize "category".
Done. Drdpw (talk) 23:57, 24 June 2021 (UTC)[reply]
  • 12:00 UTC (8:00 a.m. AST) at 28.9°N 58.7°W – Hurricane Epsilon strengthens to category 2 intensity. Distance to land needed.
Done. Drdpw (talk) 23:57, 24 June 2021 (UTC)[reply]
  • 18:00 UTC (2:00 p.m. AST) at 29.3°N 59.6°W – Hurricane Epsilon strengthens to category 3 intensity. Distance to land needed.
Done. Drdpw (talk) 23:57, 24 June 2021 (UTC)[reply]
  • 06:00 UTC (2:00 a.m. AST) at 30.2°N 60.9°W – Hurricane Epsilon weakens to category 2 intensity. Distance to land needed.
Done. Drdpw (talk) 23:57, 24 June 2021 (UTC)[reply]
  • 12:00 UTC (8:00 a.m. AST) at 30.8°N 61.3°W – Hurricane Epsilon weakens to category 1 intensity. Distance to land needed.
Done. Drdpw (talk) 23:57, 24 June 2021 (UTC)[reply]
  • 06:00 UTC (2:00 a.m. EDT) at 18.5°N 84.1°W – Tropical Storm Zeta strengthens to became a hurricane about 230 mi (370 km) southeast of Cozumel. "strengthens to became a hurricane" → "strengthens to Category 1 intensity".
Done. Drdpw (talk) 23:57, 24 June 2021 (UTC)[reply]
  • 18:00 (1:00 p.m. CDT) at 28.0°N 91.1°W – Hurricane Zeta strengthens to category 2 intensity. needs distance to land, missing UTC.
Done. Drdpw (talk) 23:57, 24 June 2021 (UTC)[reply]
  • 21:00 (4:00 p.m. CDT) at 29.2°N 90.6°E – Hurricane Zeta becomes a category 3 major hurricane and attains its peak intensity, with maximum sustained winds of 115 mph (185 km/h) and a minimum barometric pressure of 970 mbar (28.65 inHg), while simultaneously making its second landfall near Cocodrie, Louisiana. Missing UTC. Also, capitalize "category".
Done. Drdpw (talk) 23:57, 24 June 2021 (UTC)[reply]
  • 00:00 (7:00 p.m. CDT, October 28) at 30.2°N 89.9°W – Hurricane Zeta weakens to category 2 intensity inland about 10 mi (15 km) southwest of Slidell, Louisiana. Missing UTC, capitalize "category".
Done. Drdpw (talk) 23:57, 24 June 2021 (UTC)[reply]
  • 12:00 UTC (7:00 a.m. EST) at 14.8°N 81.2°W – Hurricane Eta strengthens to category 2 intensity. Capitalize "category", need distance to land.
Done. Drdpw (talk) 23:57, 24 June 2021 (UTC)[reply]
  • 15:00 UTC (10:00 a.m. EST) at 14.8°N 81.5°W – Hurricane Eta strengthens to category 3 intensity. same as last one.
Done. Drdpw (talk) 23:57, 24 June 2021 (UTC)[reply]
  • 18:00 UTC (1:00 p.m. EST) at 14.7°N 82.0°W – Hurricane Eta strengthens to category 4 intensity. same as last one.
Done. Drdpw (talk) 23:57, 24 June 2021 (UTC)[reply]
  • 00:00 UTC (7:00 p.m. EST, November 3) at 13.8°N 83.7°W – Hurricane Eta weakens to category 2 intensity about 25 mi (40 km) southwest of Puerto Cabezas. Capitalize "category".
Done. Drdpw (talk) 23:57, 24 June 2021 (UTC)[reply]
  • 06:00 (12:00 a.m.) at 14.2°N 86.7°W – Tropical Depression Eta degenerates to a disturbance over Honduras. The distance to land and the time zones seem to have run away from this entry.
Done. Drdpw (talk) 23:57, 24 June 2021 (UTC)[reply]
  • 00:00 UTC (6:00 p.m. CST, November 5) at 16.2°N 87.8°W – Disturbance Eta emerges over the Gulf of Honduras. Distance to land needed.
Done. Drdpw (talk) 23:57, 24 June 2021 (UTC)[reply]
  • 06:00 UTC (12:00 a.m. CST) at 16.7°N 87.6°W – Disturbance Eta re-develops into a tropical depression east of Belize. Distance to land needed.
Done. Drdpw (talk) 23:57, 24 June 2021 (UTC)[reply]
  • 06:00 UTC (12:00 a.m. EST) at 18.2°N 85.1°W – Tropical Depression Eta regains tropical storm status about 310 mi (500 km) west-southwest of Grand Cayman. Remove advisory ref. Move TCR ref out to the end of the entry.
Done. Drdpw (talk) 23:57, 24 June 2021 (UTC)[reply]
  • 1500 UTC (10:00 a.m. EST) at 22.5°N 79.2°W – Tropical Storm Eta emerges off the north coast of Cuba into the Straits of Florida. Missing colon, need distance to land.
Done. Drdpw (talk) 23:57, 24 June 2021 (UTC)[reply]
  • 12:00 UTC (12:00 p.m. GMT) at 28.9°N 38.0°W – Subtropical Storm Theta attains a maximum wind velocity of 70 mph (115 km/h) Forgotten period, need distance to land.
Done. Drdpw (talk) 19:05, 25 June 2021 (UTC)[reply]
  • 18:00 UTC (6:00 p.m. GMT) at 29.0°N 36.7°W – Subtropical Storm Theta transitions to a tropical storm and reaches a minimum pressure of 987 mbar (29.15 inHg). Distance to land needed.
Done. Drdpw (talk) 19:05, 25 June 2021 (UTC)[reply]
  • 18:00 UTC (1:00 p.m. EST) at 26.8°N 83.7°W – Hurricane Eta weakens to a tropical storm. Distance to land needed.
Done. Drdpw (talk) 19:05, 25 June 2021 (UTC)[reply]
  • 09:00 UTC (4:00 a.m. EST) at 29.2°N 82.9°W – Tropical Storm Eta makes landfall near Cedar Key, Florida with maximum sustained winds of 50 mph (85 km/h). Distance to land needed.
Done. Drdpw (talk) 19:05, 25 June 2021 (UTC)[reply]
  • 18:00 UTC (1:00 p.m. EST) at 30.9°N 81.3°W – Tropical Storm Eta emerges into the Atlantic Ocean just north the Florida–Georgia state line. "north" → "north of", distance to land needed.
Done. Drdpw (talk) 19:05, 25 June 2021 (UTC)[reply]
  • 18:00 UTC (1:00 p.m. EST) at 14.0°N 74.1°W – Tropical Depression Thirty-One strengthens into Tropical Storm Iota. Distance to land needed.
Done. Drdpw (talk) 19:05, 25 June 2021 (UTC)[reply]
  • 12:00 UTC (12:00 p.m. GMT) at 31.4°N 18.3°W – Tropical Depression Theta degenerates to a remnant low and later dissipates. Distance to land needed.
  • No Cat 3 intensification entry for Iota?
  • 06:00 UTC (1:00 a.m. EST) at 13.4°N 80.7°W – Hurricane Iota rapidly strengthens to category 4 intensity. Capitalize "category". Need distance to land as well.
Done. Drdpw (talk) 19:05, 25 June 2021 (UTC)[reply]
  • 2:00 UTC (7:00 a.m. EST) at 13.7°N 84.8°W – Hurricane Iota weakens to category 1 strength inland near El Pia, Nicaragua, about 90 mi (145 km) west-southwest of Puerto Cabezas. Capitalize "category".
Done. Drdpw (talk) 19:05, 25 June 2021 (UTC)[reply]
  • No Cat 3, Cat 2 weakening for Iota?
Done & Done. Drdpw (talk) 19:05, 25 June 2021 (UTC)[reply]
  • 18:00 UTC (12:00 p.m. CST) at 13.7°N 85.7°W – Hurricane Iota weakens to a tropical storm over western Nicaragua about 105 mi (160 km) east of Tegucigalpa, Honduras. No need for advisory ref, bring TCR to the end of the entry.
Done. Drdpw (talk) 19:05, 25 June 2021 (UTC)[reply]
  • 12:00 UTC (6:00 a.m. CST) at 13.7°N 89.0°W – Tropical Storm Iota weakens to a tropical depression over east-central El Salvador and later dissipates. Need distance to land.
Done. Drdpw (talk) 19:05, 25 June 2021 (UTC)[reply]

Please ping me when this is done, Noah got the rest of the issues codingcyclone advisories/damages 03:37, 18 June 2021 (UTC).[reply]

@CodingCyclone: @Hurricane Noah: It is finished. Drdpw (talk) 19:05, 25 June 2021 (UTC)[reply]

Comments from TRM

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Resolved comments from The Rambling Man (Keep wearing the mask...) 18:10, 2 September 2021 (UTC)[reply]
*Five para lead is too much per MOS.
Addressed. Drdpw (talk) 22:42, 26 August 2021 (UTC)[reply]
  • "hurricane season.[nb 1][2] The season" repetitive.
Addressed. Drdpw (talk) 22:42, 26 August 2021 (UTC)[reply]
  • " June 1, 2020 and" comma after 2020.
Done. Drdpw (talk) 22:42, 26 August 2021 (UTC)[reply]
  • "when it’s first two" its
Done. Drdpw (talk) 22:42, 26 August 2021 (UTC)[reply]
  • "it’s first two, named storms" why comma?
Removed. Drdpw (talk) 22:42, 26 August 2021 (UTC)[reply]
  • "the old record" previous.
Addressed. Drdpw (talk) 22:42, 26 August 2021 (UTC)[reply]
  • "Of these, 14 became" the last "these" was the 28 from the previous record...
Addressed. Drdpw (talk) 22:42, 26 August 2021 (UTC)[reply]
  • "names Laura, Eta and Iota were" no need for italics.
It is general practice in tropical storm articles to italicize storm names when used apart from specific storms (which is not to say that they must be italicized, however). Drdpw (talk) 22:42, 26 August 2021 (UTC)[reply]
  • "amount of damage and fatalities" and number of fatalities.
Done. Drdpw (talk) 22:42, 26 August 2021 (UTC)[reply]
  • "This timeline documents..." can be moved to the Timeline section.
The paragraph is where it is because that's where it is in all prior Atlantic hurricane seasons TLs (which is not to say it cannot be moved, however). Drdpw (talk) 22:42, 26 August 2021 (UTC)[reply]
  • UTC is linked twice at the start of the timeline and then never again...
Removed second link. Drdpw (talk) 22:42, 26 August 2021 (UTC)[reply]
  • "of Ciudad del Carmen Campeche" comma?
Done. Drdpw (talk) 22:42, 26 August 2021 (UTC)[reply]
  • What timezone is AST?
Done. Drdpw (talk) 22:42, 26 August 2021 (UTC)[reply]
  • "a tropical wave" what's that?
"Tropical wave" is linked at formation of Tropical Depression Eight. Drdpw (talk) 22:42, 26 August 2021 (UTC)[reply]
  • "intensifies to Category 3 strength about 200 mi (320 km) " then "intensifies to Category 4 strength about 200 mi (320 km)" it didn't move in six hours?
Fixed. Drdpw (talk) 22:42, 26 August 2021 (UTC)[reply]
  • "Galveston, Texas" link.
Done. Drdpw (talk) 22:42, 26 August 2021 (UTC)[reply]
  • Link Grand Cayman.
Done. Drdpw (talk) 22:42, 26 August 2021 (UTC)[reply]

That's my first pass. The Rambling Man (Keep wearing the mask...) 18:46, 26 August 2021 (UTC)[reply]

@The Rambling Man: Thanks for your input. Drdpw (talk) 22:42, 26 August 2021 (UTC)[reply]

Comments by Dudley

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  • "The 2020 Atlantic hurricane season was the most active and the fifth-costliest Atlantic hurricane season on record." You should clarify what "active" means here. Number of storms of all type? Number of named storms?
Clarified. Drdpw (talk) 17:57, 8 September 2021 (UTC)[reply]
  • I suggest moving note 3 to the last paragraph of the lead. A reader wanting to clarify (say) the June 9 entry will not know that they have to look at a May 19 note.
Moved. Drdpw (talk) 17:57, 8 September 2021 (UTC)[reply]
  • You are inconsistent how you show "Halifax" - Halifax, Nova Scotia, then Halifax and then back to Halifax, Nova Scotia.
Addressed. Drdpw (talk) 17:57, 8 September 2021 (UTC)[reply]
  • It seems inconsistent to use the English Cape Verde for the time zone and Portuguese Cabo Verde for the islands. As this is an article in English, I think English names for places should be used.
The TL uses Cape Verde for the time zone and Cabo Verde for the islands because that's what the National Hurricane Center uses (which is not to say that Cape Verde couldn't be used for both, however). Drdpw (talk) 17:57, 8 September 2021 (UTC)[reply]
Such records/distinctions are not typically noted in these TLs. Drdpw (talk) 17:57, 8 September 2021 (UTC)[reply]
  • No change needed but the map shows a storm crossing Ireland and Britain, but I could not see it in the list. Which one was it?
Those would be Edouard's extratropical remnants. Drdpw (talk) 17:57, 8 September 2021 (UTC)[reply]

Dudley Miles (talk) 16:00, 8 September 2021 (UTC)[reply]

@Dudley Miles: Thank you for your input. Drdpw (talk) 17:57, 8 September 2021 (UTC)[reply]

Promoting. --PresN 01:17, 17 September 2021 (UTC)[reply]

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