Wikipedia:Peer review/Battle of Crete/archive1

Battle of Crete[edit]

Is it getting too long? Should it be broken into chunks? What related articles would you suggest? Any suggestions would be appreciated. --Jpbrenna 22:28, 4 August 2005 (UTC)[reply]

I don't think it's getting long at all, and the battle descriptions from day two onward could readily be expanded. Eventually I think it would be nice to have a more detailed order of battle page, similar to what's available on the "List of orders of battle" page. Probably down to the brigade/regiment/battalion level would be sufficient. Thanks. — RJH 15:16, 5 August 2005 (UTC)[reply]

Crete order of battle What do you think so far? --Jpbrenna 18:28, 7 August 2005 (UTC)[reply]

Yes that looks most excellent, although I think listing the commanders below division level is probably overkill. Why the Italian flag? Were there Italian forces in the Crete landings? Just wondering. :) — RJH 14:50, 8 August 2005 (UTC)[reply]

It is not too long. Neeed references and 2nd level sectioning. More pics would be nice, a map would be essential. Quotation is nice, but I think it will have to be moved to Wikiquote - or at least below lead, as in Warsaw Uprising for example. --Piotr Konieczny aka Prokonsul Piotrus ^Talk 11:10, 6 August 2005 (UTC)[reply]

Excellent read. However, there are no external links. — Stevey7788 (talk) 23:19, 10 August 2005 (UTC)[reply]